Question

假设你是李华，在某国际志愿者协会兼职。你的外国朋友Tom写信向你寻求一些关于在日常生活中如何关爱残疾人的建议，请你用英语写一封回信。

注意：1.字数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

Dear Tom,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Tom,

How are you doing recently? According to your needs, I have collected the real examples of my assisting disabled people in their normal day-to-day lives. Considering I need to work very hard in weekdays to support my family, I can only do voluntary work in the International volunteer association. As usual, I take those sitting in wheelchairs to park for walking, breathing fresh air and helping them to do some exercises. Also, for those mentally disabled, we can assist them in recovering their intelligence by speaking to them and play some games with them. Annually, we usually financially help those disabled people by a charitable meeting. I normally donate 10% of my total income per year to the charity. In general, we would like to do more to help those disable people and we hope more wealthy and free people can help them as well.

Hope my tips can help you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。本文属于提纲类作文，考生在成文时应注意：合理发挥想象力，使文章的表达自然，丰满。文章的写作要点要齐全。注意文章的人称：以第一人称为主。时态：一般现在时。注意使用高级词汇和句型，以提高文章的档次；恰当使用一些连词、插入语，使文章表达自然，流畅。注意词数：100词左右。首先点明写信的目的According to your needs, I have collected the real examples of my assisting disabled people in their normal day-to-day lives. 收集了我帮助残疾人正常生活的真实例子。具体实施：As usual, I take those sitting in wheelchairs to park for walking, breathing fresh air and helping them to do some exercises. Also, for those mentally disabled, we can assist them in recovering their intelligence by speaking to them and play some games with them. Annually, we usually financially help those disabled people by a charitable meeting. I normally donate 10% of my total income per year to the charity.表述了对残疾人如何照顾；对有智力障碍的人怎样帮助，以及拿出收入的10%帮助残疾人。最后文章总结：In general, we would like to do more to help those disable people and we hope more wealthy and free people can help them as well.句子中使用了would like to do sth.愿意做某些事。

【名师点睛】

对于这类写作要简洁明了，直入主题，平时学习时多进行作文模板的记忆，万能句型的积累，高中作文写作，注意以下十点：

1. 在写作之前，首先对题目进行认真的审清，并在脑海中回想自己积累的哪些句式、句型、单词能用进来，这些单词、句型都应是经典的，不会错的。

2. 写的过程中，多注意使用“起承转合”的连词，使文章更富有条理，层次分明。

3. 写的过程中，多注意使用定语从句，包括非限制性定语从句。要熟悉英美人写文章的习惯，遇到专有地名、人名一定要用非限制性定语从句，强调唯一性。

4. 写的过程中，多注意使用副词、形容词起到修饰的作用，并注意切忌重复，多使用不同的表达进行转述。多使用高级词汇。

5. 写的过程中，多注意使用平时经常用的万能句型，用不上的时候也要往上靠，自己处理好上下文的连贯性。

6. 写的过程中，多注意使用被动、倒装、虚拟语气及非谓语动词作定语这样的表达。

7. 学会替换，对不会写的进行替换，转个圈说明白。

8. 切忌使用平时不常见的表达，不要出现“中式英文”。

9. 文章中代词要指代明确，自己把握不准时，宁愿重新将指代的内容写出来。

10.英语文字不宜写的太小，所有字母都顶横线写好，看起来卷面整洁，写错的地方只需轻轻划一笔就行，切不可反复涂黑。