假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
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Mental health is very important. Therefore, it is easily overlooked, which can result in seriously metal diseases. Here are some suggestion on keeping good metal health.
First, know your own potential and accept you for who you are. Instead of have impractical expectations for yourself, you should make practical goals for your life.
Second, be sociable and making as many friends as possible. Try to be a person who is easy to get along. When you are discouraging, you can share your troubles with your friends, who can help you out.
Third, love your life and work. Try to display your talent in your work. You will take the pleasure in your achievements, that will make you happy.
1.This kind of forest exists ____________（无处；到处都无）else in the world.
2.He has been _____________（轻打；轻敲）his fingers on the table for some time, which indicates that something is bothering him.
3.If someone __________________（妥协；折衷）with you, it means he has decided to give up something he originally wanted.
4.We were within a few miles of home when the accident _____________（发生；出现）.
5.______________________（不管；不顾）of where we are and what we are doing, we want access to our data.
6.When she heard the news, the cup in her hand ______________（滑行；滑倒）down onto the floor.
7.They also focus on deeper, more important qualities that are ___________________（有益的；受益的）to society.
8.He often asked me the question whether this law needed to be ________________（改革；革新）.
9.What’s more, a great many workers have _________________（罢工）for a pay increase of 6%.
10.In some places, women may not walk down a public street at night without being _______________（陪伴；伴奏）by a man.
11.Without _______________________（捐赠）blood most of illnesses would have probably been cureless.
12.Many of these tools have been specially _______________（使适应；改编）for use by disabled people.
13.The course teaches you the theory but there’s no ___________________________（代替者；代用品）for practical experience.
14.Everyone should be ________________（意识到的；知道的）of these factors and how they affect the most important ares of their social life.
15.He is getting married again, after two ____________（离婚）, so he obviously hasn’t profited by his experiences.
Extremely handsome and athletic, Will looked and dressed like a fashion model. Everything seemed to be easy to him. With his charm, 1. (intelligent), and talents, his business was lively and success was a way of life. So when 2. (face) with a lawsuit（诉讼）one day, Will assumed 3. the case would work out as 4. (easy) as everything in his life and he didn’t worry about it. But it didn’t and the suit finally led to the breakup of his company. He tried for months afterward to get 5. job, but no one would hire him.
Will had to learn that his talents were wonderful but were damaged by an attitude of arrogance（傲慢）. He looked down on people6.didn’t have his gifts,7. (treat) them with impatience and annoyance. He felt superior to them and judged them as worthless or stupid. Will made sense of his situation and elected 8.(learn) the lesson of modesty and at last he turned9. (he) circumstances around.
Have pride in who you are and what you 10. (accomplish) so far. However, if you find yourself having secret of arrogance, remind yourself of the lesson of modesty before the universe does it for you.
When I was growing up my dad would often give me small tasks to finish to help out around the house. Some were easy but the three I remember the most were the three ______ of all. The first was helping to weed the four
____ we had. It was ______ work. I would rather ride my bike than crawl in the dirt on my hands and knees
____ the thousands of weeds in our gardens. The second was piling firewood for ______. It was tough work and I got more than my share of pieces. I would rather walk in the woods than piling it in rows. The third was _______water from a mountain spring to our house ______ our well water had too much iron in it to ______.
Over the years, though, I learned to see the ______ in all the things my dad had made me do. Having fresh vegetables for dinner was a delight. ______ a cold glass of iced tea made from the mountain spring water was a pure ______. Standing by the wood stove on a snowy December day was a wonderful way to ______. I saw as well that all this work my dad had given me had ______ made me a better, stronger and more caring man. Most of all, I ______ that when I did my work with a(n) ______ heart, it didn’t feel like work at all.
Over the years I have learned something else too. When we do the work for our Heavenly Father with a _______spirit, it doesn’t feel like work, either. It feels like that every act of ______, word of encouragement, and gift of love we share will only make our lives ______, make our hearts happier, and bring our souls closer to Heaven.
I am so ______ to both my dad and my Father in Heaven. They showed me the ______ of work and more importantly they showed me the pricelessness of love.
1.A. simplest B. most suitable C. most awesome D. toughest
2.A. basements B. armchairs C. gardens D. streets
3.A. awful B. elegant C. bound D. noisy
4.A. operating B. scanning C. pushing D. pulling
5.A. staff B. holiday C. winter D. accommodation
6.A. distributing B. dragging C. carrying D. conducting
7.A. because B. unless C. otherwise D. but
8.A. boil B. obtain C. undertake D. drink
9.A. regulations B. attention C. rewards D. superiors
10.A. Seizing B. Enjoying C. Performing D. Reforming
11.A. desire B. challenge C. significance D. pleasure
12.A. dry up B. warm up C. stay up D. keep up
13.A. merely B. immediately C. gradually D. temporarily
14.A. remembered B. recommended C. regretted D. realized
15.A. ambitious B. happy C. brae D. modest
16.A. loving B. competing C. outgoing D. punishing
17.A. witness B. curiosity C. kindness D. sympathy
18.A. richer B. better C. worse D. poorer
19.A. kind B. lucky C. grateful D. vivid
20.A. key B. way C. aim D. value
Often during a conversation I’ll get the question. “Where have you traveled?” I’m always a little hesitant to answer because travel is typically viewed as going somewhere abroad and my travels haven’t exactly consisted of going abroad. 1. Travel is experienced when you ...
1. Step out of your comfort zone.
Have you ever heard of the saying “Life begins at the end of your comfort zone.”? The same goes for travel. You cannot travel unless you get planning! But the act of stepping out of your comfort zone doesn’t just stop once you’ve finished planning. 2. You have to let yourself be involved in whatever experience may come your way to really experience the beauty of travel.
2. Open your mind.
Wherever your destination may be, you need to arrive with an open mind. You’re going to be experiencing new sights, cultures, foods, maybe even languages. 3. Be open to trying new things, be open to understanding and be open to accepting. More importantly, open your mind to learning. You will learn so much more than you’ve ever dreamed of learning in a classroom.
3. 4.
Through experience, travel can really help you reflect on who you are as a person, what sights your heart responds to and what cultures have powerful influences on you. You begin to realize through the different experiences you find just how capable you really are. Traveling is not about the journey to the destination; it’s about the journey you take into yourself. 5.
A. Discover yourself.
B. Experience something new.
C. It continues throughout your travels.
D. Travel can be experienced in the next city, state or country.
E. You become equipped with a new pair of eyes and a more accurate sense of self.
F. What I want to share with you is that travel is not experienced by your destination.
G. You can’t learn to see the beauty within them unless you view them with an open mind.
Most parents and teachers want children to be happy. To that end, parents find themselves doing things for kids to make them happy, like buying gifts, taking them for ice cream, playing games together, or helping with homework.
Teachers are constantly doing things for children, too, like bringing treats to class, planning fun trips, and supporting students in other immeasurable ways.
Do acts of kindness toward children make us happier parents and teachers? Of course they do.
Unfortunately, we don’t make children happy by simply enabling them to be receivers of kindness. We increase their feelings of happiness and well-being by teaching them to be givers of kindness.
The truth is that children are born to be altruistic. But somewhere between birth and 4th grade, they are socialized to think more about themselves than others.
How do we change this and improve children’s well-being?
A recent study, Kindness Counts, conducted by researchers from the University of British Columbia and the University of California, broke new ground by showing the benefits gained by teens when they were taught happiness-increasing skills.
For a month, several hundred 9-11-year-olds performed and recorded three acts of kindness each week for anyone they wished. Another several hundred kept track of three pleasant places they visited during the week.
Not surprisingly, the results were consistent with adult studies. When kids performed acts of kindness or took notice of the pleasant places they visited during the week, they significantly increased feelings of happiness and satisfaction.
But hose who performed acts of kindness received an additional benefit. Measuring how well children were liked or accepted by their peers（同伴）, the study showed those who performed acts of kindness gained an average of 1.5 friends during the four-week period ---- good support for the idea that “nice guys finish first.”
1.What do most parents and teachers do to make children happy?
A. Do good deeds for them.
B. Take them to see funny things.
C. Teach them the secret of happiness.
D. Develop their happiness-increasing skills.
2.The underlined word “altruistic” in Paragraph 5 is closest in meaning to “ ”.
A. optimistic B. energetic
C. curious D. generous
3.What can be concluded from the study?
A. Children can change their attitude easily.
B. Happy people are likely to do good deeds.
C. Acts of kindness are the key to happiness.
D. Visits to places lead to much more happiness.
4.What does the underlined part “additional benefit” in the last paragraph refer to?
A. Winning support from teachers.
B. Broadening their social circle.
C. Showing respect for others.
D. Getting higher test scores.
