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短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I always think my mother is also your good friend. When I lose my first tooth, when I found a friend, and when I fell off from my bike, she was there. She was proud when I succeeded but supportive when I failed. She always listened me. She seemed to know when I was asking for advices and when I just needed a good cry. We actual shared experiences, hopes, sadness and fears. She made me felt that my opinions were never small and silly. She never forgot to tell me what she believed in me. Now my mother is facing with some difficulties in life. I want to tell her everything will be OK and I believe in her, too.

Answer

1.your →my

2.lose→lost

3.去掉 from

4.but→and

5.me前加to

6.advices→advice

7.actual →actually

8.felt →feel

9.what→that 或者删除what

10.facing→faced或者去掉with

【解析】

试题分析：把妈妈当成好朋友，分享生活中的喜怒哀乐。

1.your →my 句意：我总是把我的妈妈看作是我的好朋友。故把your →my。

2.lose→lost 句意：当我找掉第一颗牙的时候，当我找到朋友的时候，当我从自行车上摔下来的时候，她都在我身边。可知用一般过去时态，故把lose→lost。

3.去掉 from fall from从---落下来，故去掉 from。

4.but→and 句意：我成功时她是自豪的，我失败时她是给予帮助的。可知此处表示并列关系，故把but→and。

5.me前加to listen to sb.听某人说，故在me前加to。

6.advices→advice advice是不可数名词，故把advices→advice。

7.actual →actually 副词修饰动词，故把actual →actually。

8.felt →feel make sb. do sth.使某人做某事，故把felt →feel。

9.what→that 或者删除what tell后面跟宾语从句，从句中不缺成分，引导词只起引导作用，故把what→that 或者删除what。

10.facing sth./be faced with sth.面临着---，面对着---，故把facing→faced或者去掉with。

【名师点拨】

1. 动词不定式作宾语补足语

encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事；want sb. to do 想让某人做某事；invite sb. to do邀请某人做某事； ask sb. to do 请求某人做某事；order sb. to do命令某人做某事； tell sb. to do告诉某人做某事；force sb. to do 强迫某人做某事；allow sb. to do允许某人做某事； forbid sb. to do 禁止某人做某事；persuade sb. to do 劝说某人做某事。

2.不带to 的动词不定式作宾语补足语

have/make/see/watch/hear/let/notice/observe/feel/look at/listen to sb. do sth.

注意：help sb. (to) do sth.

温馨提示：不带to 的动词不定式作宾语补足语，但是变成被动语态时要把to加上。He made me feel at home. （主动语态）I was made to feel at home.（被动语态）

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