Question

假如你是红星中学李华，你的一位外国朋友所在的杂志社正在开展改进社会风气活动，请你根据下列要点，用英文写一篇征文。

1.不守公德现象;      2. 改进的方法；     3. 呼吁。

注意：

    1．词数100左右；   2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

Answer

Nowadays we can still see some behaviors against public morals. People often complain that they see some people jump in the queue, disturbing the harmony of society, and to be worse, chairs meant /intended for children and seniors are occupied by the young. It is high time that we should take actions to improve public morals.

Firstly, government should make it a rule that people will get fined or punished if caught behaving against public morals. Additionally, it makes sense that schools should take on the duty to give students lessons on how to be a qualified citizen. Last but not the least, only by setting some examples can people learn how to behave

decently from people around. All in all, it owes to the majority’s support that we can live in a peaceful and harmonious neighborhood. Don’t hesitate to get rid of your own improper behaviors.

【解析】

试题分析：本次作文要求根据一位外国朋友所在的杂志社正在开展改进社会风气活动，根据要点写一篇征文。要点包括：1.不守公德现象; 2. 改进的方法；3. 呼吁。故既要完成任务，又要兼顾形式的要求。

写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：文章运用了宾语从句that they see some people jump in the queue和that schools should take on the duty to give students lessons on how to be a qualified citizen. 非谓语动词disturbing the harmony of society, It is high time that句型，同位语从句that people will get fined or punished if caught behaving against public morals. intended for, take actions, makes sense, get rid of 等词汇及to be worse, Firstly, Additionally, Last but not the least, All in all等连接词。

考点：任务型作文写作。

【名师点睛】

书面表达写作步骤：

书面表达一般分为三个过程：思维、组织、表达。先是思维，审题想清要用的人称、时态及文章结构，把要写的东西在脑中 思考，要对所给材料进行组织，把这些思维作出整理，使其条理、系统化，但这还是较粗糙的，可能还有一些用词不当或语言错误；最后才是表达，把组织过的材料仔细推敲，确定无问题了再落笔成文。在撰写时要注意主谓一 致，时态呼应，用词贴切等。上述三个过程，最难的是第三个过程，需 要我们有较好的语法知识，掌握一定数量的句型，习惯用语，熟练的写作技巧，这样才能写 出通顺生动的文章来。总之，要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧。平时要多分析范文，多读多背诵，学会恰当地引用和培养自己的语感。