Question

你的美国朋友Alice两年前来过重庆玩，她最近来信希望了解重庆的现状及你的现状。假设你是刘梅，请给她写一封回信。比如天气，人口，交通等等。

字数：80字左右

Answer

Dear Alice,

It’s cool in Chongqing now. It’s right for walking. The air is more and more cleaner here. The flowers in Chongqing are everywhere, and Chongqing is more and more beautiful. The population in Chongqing now is larger than two years ago. People here are friendly. The traffic is busier. I am in Grade Eight. I am really busy. I study until 9 at night every school day. I go to after school class on weekdays. I want to go out for fun. But my mother always tells me to study. Study, study, study, can you give me some advice? What about you?

Yours,

Liu mei

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，给Alice回信介绍重庆的现状以及我的现状，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：It’s……，The air is……，I am……，I want to……，I go to……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了重庆的现状：天气，人口，交通等，接下来介绍我的现状，最后询问Alice情况怎么样。此处more and more beautiful, after school, on weekdays，go out， tell sb to do sth, give sb sth, what about等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。