Question

随着经济（economy）快速发展，越来越多的人买得起车了，私家车不再仅仅属于富人。然而越来越多的私家车给人们的生活带来了怎样的影响呢？请以“私家车Private cars 的利与弊”为主题写一篇作文。

优点	缺点
可以节省时间，不必花费时间等公交车； 使旅行变得更容易，享受沿途美丽的风景； ……	私家车的数量变多，浪费能源； 由于驾驶员的粗心，事故频发； 改变了健康的生活方式，宁愿开车也不…
说说你自己的看法……

要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

      2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；

      3）词数90个左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；

      4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

With the development of economy, more and more people can afford to buy the cars.

Answer

Private cars have many advantages. People can save time.They don’t need to spend much time waiting for the bus. Private cars make it easier for people to traval. They can enjoy the beautiful views on the road. People can go anywhere any time. Private cars also have a lot of disadvantages. First, the number of private cars is becoming larger.They waste much energgy. Second, more accidents have happened because of the drivers’ carelessness. Third, they change people’s healthy lifestyle. Many people would rather drive their cars than walk.

In my opinion, we can ride bikes to school and to work. Riding is a good way to keep healthy. Bikes don’t produce pollution either. Riding a bike is even faster than driving in the rush hour.

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍私家车的利与弊。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：People can……，Private cars also have……，the number of private cars is…….，Many people would rather……，we can……，Riding a bike is……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了司机车的好处，接下来介绍司机车的弊端，最后表达自己的观点。此处need to do sth, spend time doing sth, the number of, because of, would rather……than……,a good way to do sth, keep healthy, in the rush hour等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。