Question

自开展读书月活动以来，班级同学发生了很大的变化，班会课上，班长就同学们的变化发表了演讲。请根据以下中文提示，以“Changes of my classmates”为题，写一篇演讲稿。

过去	1.花很多时间上网、玩手机游戏            2.与家人交流太少 3．……
现在	1.养成了读书的习惯，每天至少读书半小时 2.经常向老师寻求建议该读什么书 3.到目前为止，每个人已经读了5本书了 4.增长知识、开阔眼界、获得快乐
展望	……

要求：

1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

2.必须包含所有信息，并作适当发挥；

3.不得使用真实姓名和校名等;    

4.字数在80字左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。

Changes of  my classmates

My classmates have changed a lot recently. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That's all for my speech. Thank you for your listening.

Answer

Changes of my classmates

My classmates have changed a lot recently.

In the past it took them a long time to surf the Internet through mobile phones every day. They seldom talked with their parents. Now it is a good habit for them to read for half an hour every day. Moreover, they often ask their teachers for advice about some books. So far they each have read five books. Therefore, reading not only broadens their views but also brings them happiness. They often keep in touch with their parents and friends. At the same time, reading makes them relaxed. 

That's all for my speech. Thank you for your listening

【解析】这篇作文要求我们介绍开展读书活动以来，班里学生们的变化，题目中有一个表格，列举了学生们发生的主要变化，写作时，我们可以根据表格的内容，组织语言，串联成短文。其中有两个内容需要学生自己来发挥想象力，补充完整，这需要注意补充的内容要与全文内容密切相关，并能上下连贯。短文的时态应分成两种情况，介绍过去时，用一般过去时态，谓语动词用过去式；现在的变化用一般现在时态。短文必须包括表格中的所有要点，并且要注意语言和语法的准确性，使用一些连词或者句型，使短文表达流畅、连贯。

点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中作者按照题目的要求，介绍了自己班级里学生从开展读书活动以来发生的变化。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有内容，在需要补充的地方，进行了发挥，跟上下文意能很好的衔接起来；其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，尤其是注意了一般过去时态和一般现在时态，动词形式准确，语法合乎英语的表达需要；最后这篇短文中使用了一些较好的短语和句型，如In the past it took them a long time to surf the Internet through mobile phones every day.、Moreover, they often ask their teachers for advice about some books、They often keep in touch with their parents and friends.、At the same time, reading makes them relaxed等。