Question

很多年以前，私家车很贵，并没有多少人能够买得起。 随着经济（economy）快速发展，越来越多的人买得起汽车了，私家车不再仅仅属于富人。然而越来越多的私家车给人们的生活带来怎样的影响呢？请以“私家车（Private Cars）的利与弊”为题，写一篇作文。

Advantages	1、人们可以节省时间：不必花费时间等公交车；…
2、使旅行变得更容易：享受沿途美丽的风景；…
Disadvantages	1、私家车的数量变多：浪费能源；…
2、改变健康的生活方式：宁愿开车也不…
3、事故频发: 由于驾驶员的粗心 …
说说你自己的看法（至少两点）

要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

  2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；

  3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）

      4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

With the development of economy, more and more people can afford to buy the cars.

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Answer

One possible version:

With the development of economy, more and more people can afford to buy the cars.

On the one hand, private cars have many advantages. As we know, people can save time. They don’t need to spend much time waiting for the bus. It takes them less time to go to school or work. Moreover, private cars make it easier for people to travel. They can enjoy the beautiful view along the road.

On the other hand, private cars also have a lot of disadvantages. First, the number of the private cars is becoming larger. They waste much energy. At the same time, they pollute the environment. Second, they change people’s healthy lifestyle. Many people would rather drive their cars than walk. Third, because of the drivers’ carelessness, more accidents have happened.

In my opinion, I think…

【解析】试题分析：考查话题类作文。考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示,认真审题，根据提示，确定文章的中心。注意人称和时态。尽量使用熟悉句型，使用简单句式，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。特别注意：１）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；２）词数：100词左右．３）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文。上下文意思连贯，用词准确、句子通顺，注意人称和时态。包含了所有要点，字数符合要求，无语法错误和拼写错误．文中使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如On the one hand, On the other hand, At the same time, They don’t need to spend much time waiting for the bus.等，特别使用了表达先后顺序的连词（First，Second, Third,）运用，使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有感染力。