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假如你是李华,打算毕业的到美国留学,请你给你的美国笔友Tom写一封电子邮件,告诉...

假如你是李华,打算毕业的到美国留学,请你给你的美国笔友Tom写一封电子邮件,告诉他你去留学的原因,对将要面临的语言和学业压力的担扰,并征询对方建议。

注意:1. 词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3.开头语已为你写好。

Dear Tom,

I’ve finally made my decision to go to American for further study after graduating from high school.

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Yours,

Li Hua

 

Dear Tom I’ve finally made my decision to go to America for further study after graduating from high school. However, there are some uncertainties that worry me. I’m writing to ask for your advice. You know going to college in the USA is always my dream. For one thing, it is a great opportunity to experience a different culture, to which I am always looking forward. For another, I can broaden my horizons through it. but to be honest, I feel a little worried about the challenges that I will have to face in the future study. I don’t have a good command of English, so I’m afraid I’ll have difficulty in fitting in soon. Besides, I have the pressure from my lessons, which I don’t know how to handle. With so many things brothering me, I hope you can offer me some practical suggestions. Thank you and give me best wishes to the family. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】【名师点睛】高中英语作文写作技巧 1、审题:审题就是要看清题意,确定文章的中心思想、主题,并围绕中心思想组织材料。 2、进行构思,列出简单的提纲,打造文章之骨架。要安排好层次段落,铺设好过渡,处理好开头和结尾。 3、扩展成文:扩展的内容一定要紧扣主题, 在这一步骤中还需注意:首先确保提纲中段落结构的思路与各段主题句的一致性;再次要综合考虑各个段落的内容安排,避免段落内容的交叉。还要用好连接词,注意段落间、句子间的连贯性;使用不同长度的句子,增强句子的连贯性和表现力。重要的是要灵活运用各种句式,如倒装句、强调句、省略句、主从复合句、对比句、分词短语、介词短语等,从而增加文章的可读性。 本文考查的书信作文。要求给你的考查应用文中的书信的写作。要求向你的笔友Tom写一封电子邮件。介绍你对将要面临的语言和学业压力的担扰,并向对方征求意见。注意本文使用一般现在时,描述要尽量选择简洁的语言,运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。 亮点说明: 本文第一段首先点明写信的原因。在叙述原因中使用了定语从句: there are some uncertainties that worry me. 第二段详细说明到美国留学的原因。用连接词(For one thing,…For another,…)把两个原因连接起来。在叙述过程中运用了定语从句 …, to which I am always looking forward.; …the challenges that I will have to face in the future study. I don’t have a good command of English, so I’m afraid I’ll have difficulty in fitting in soon. 接着叙述了对将面临的语言和学业压力的提忧。用连词Besides引出压力(I have the pressure from my lessons),同时征求对方的建议再有一个定语从句 which I don’t know how to handle. 用一个非谓语作宾补:With so many things brothering me, 最后再次感谢对方的好意。 总之,本文内容完整,结构合理,层次清晰,行文连贯;句式上富有变化,简单句和复杂句结合使用,使用了定语从句等,还使用用适当的连接词把句子连接起来,这样文章显得更连贯。  
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