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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)并在其下面写出该加的词

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉

修改:在错词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Mary wanted to be a nurse when he left school. Meanwhile, she joined the Red Cross and had some limited training. She taught that in case of an accident she should give the person first aid at once or then send for a doctor. One day, there were an accident in a busy street. When Mary arrived in, she saw a man bending over a woman who had been knocked down by a car and lied motionless in the street. Mary ran up, pushed the man away, informed the crowd what she was a Red Cross nurse and began to help a wounded woman. After a few minutes, the man said, "While you reach the part about send for a doctor, dont worry. Im here already.

 

Mary wanted to be a nurse when left school. , she joined the Red Cross and had some limited training. She taught that in case of an accident she should give the person first aid at once then send for a doctor. One day, there an accident in a busy street. When Mary arrived , she saw a man bending over a woman who had been knocked down by a car and lied in the street. Mary ran up, pushed the man away, informed the crowd she was a Red Cross nurse and began to help wounded woman. After a few minutes, the man said, "While you reach the part about for a doctor, don’t worry. I’m here already."   【解析】 【语篇解读】一心想成为护士的玛丽加入了红十字会并接受了有限的培训。她学会了遇到突发事件先进行急救然后去请医生。在一次事故现场,玛丽推开了参与救援的医生给受伤者进行急救。 第一处:he改为she。考查代词。指代前面的名词Mary,应用she作为主语。 第二处:meanwhile改为therefore。考查副词。此处前后两句是因果关系,故用表因果的副词therefore。 第三处:she与taught之间加was。考查时态语态。结合语境,此处应表示“她被教给……”,表示过去的情况,故应用一般过去式的被动语态was taught。 第四处:or改为and。考查连词。give与send for是顺承关系而不是选择关系,故用and。 第五处:were改为was。考查主谓一致。there be句式中,be的单复数由其后名词an accident决定,故用was。 第六处:去掉arrive后的in。考查动词。arrive是不及物动词,其后无宾语时,不能加介词in,故去掉in。 第七处:motionless改为motionlessly。考查副词。修饰动词lied,应用副词,故将motionless改为motionlessly。 第八处:what改为that。考查宾语从句。宾语从句的结构和意义都完整,应用that引导,故将what改为that。 第九处:a改为the。考查冠词。此处特指上文提到的受伤的那个妇女,故用定冠词the。 第十处:send改为sending。考查非谓语动词。send跟在介词about后作宾语,应用sending。    
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Controlling Anger

Becoming angry is something beyond the control of people 1 Becoming angry can do a lot of damages, both mental and physical. However, there are methods for discovering how to control anger and not suffer later.

2 The moment you feel there are chances of you becoming angry, get away from those circumstances. In fact, there can be no better a judge than you, for discovering what it is or who it is that makes you become angry, and then at that moment choose to think about something else that can lighten your feelings.

●Keep a check on your breathing.  3 By controlling the process of breathing, you can actually slow down your anger greatly. You can count till the number three as you breathe in, hold it for 3 seconds and again count till three while breathing out. You have to concentrate on the count as you do this and repeat for as many times as is required.

4 For example, if you're experiencing road anger while driving, you can choose to tell yourself that the person who overtook you by a vehicle was in a hurry as a result of some emergency and appreciate the fact that nothing major had happened to your car. Repeat this form of self talk to yourself every time you are in the middle of such an angry situation.

●Look for a support in other people. 5 It needs to be clear right at the beginning as to why you are discussing your concerns with that individual. Let the other individual know what you want from the other person. After you're done with your part of discussing about the circumstances, chances are that you'll feel much better than before.

A. Talk to yourself positively.

B. Come to a stop as soon as you are angry.

C. Try to see the situation in a different light.

D. You can also ask for help from the one you rely on.

E. What you can do when you become angry is to breathe deeply.

F. In fact, almost all people at one point of time or the other become angry.

G. You can imagine going to a place you consider to be calming as well as relaxing.

 

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B

(2017·浙江)Benjamin West, the father of American painting, showed his talent for art when he was only six years of age. But he did not know about brushes before a visitor told him he needed one. In those days, a brush was made from camel’s hair. There were no camels nearby. Benjamin decided that cat hair would work instead. He cut some fur from the family cat to make a brush.

The brush did not last long. Soon Benjamin needed more fur. Before long, the cat began to look ragged 蓬乱). His father said that the cat must be sick. Benjamin was forced to admit what he had been doing.

The cat’s lot was about to improve. That year, one of Benjamin’s cousins, Mr. Pennington, came to visit. He was impressed with Benjamin’s drawings. When he went home, he sent Benjamin a box of paint and some brushes. He also sent six engravings(版画 by an artist. These were the first pictures and first real paint and brushes Benjamin had ever seen. In 1747, when Benjamin was nine years old, Mr. Pennington returned for another visit. He was amazed at what Benjamin had done with his gift. He asked Benjamin’s parents if he might take the boy to Philadelphia for a visit.

   In the city, Mr. Pennington gave Benjamin materials for creating oil paintings. The boy began a landscape(风景) painting. William Williams, a well-known painter, came to see him work. Williams was impressed with Benjamin and gave him two classic books on painting to take home. The books were long and dull. Benjamin could read only a little, having been a poor student. But he later said,"Those two books were my companions by day, and under my pillow at night."While it is likely that he understood very little of the books, they were his introduction to classical paintings. The nine-year-old boy decided then that he would be an artist.

1.What is the text mainly about?

A. Benjamin’s visit to Philadelphia.

B. Williams’ influence on Benjamin.

C. The beginning of Benjamin’s life as an artist.

D. The friendship between Benjamin and Pennington.

2. What does the underlined sentence in paragraph 3 suggest?

A. The cat would be closely watched.

B. The cat would get some medical care.

C. Benjamin would leave his home shortly.

D. Benjamin would have real brushes soon.

3.What did Pennington do to help Benjamin develop his talent?

A. He took him to see painting exhibitions.

B. He provided him with painting materials.

C. He sent him to a school in Philadelphia.

D. He taught him how to make engravings.

4. Williams’ two books helped Benjamin to ________.

A. master the use of paints   

B. appreciate landscape paintings

C. get to know other painters   

D. make up his mind to be a painter

 

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(2016·浙江)A scientist working at her lab bench and a six-month-old baby playing with his food might seem to have little in common. After all, the scientist is engaged in serious research to uncover the very nature of the physical world, and the baby is, well, just playing…right? Perhaps, but some developmental psychologists(心理学家) have argued that this "play" is more like a scientific investigation than one might think.

Take a closer look at the baby playing at the table. Each time the bowl of rice is pushed over the table edge, it falls to the ground and, in the process, it brings out important evidence about how physical objects interact (相互作用): bowls of rice do not float in mid-air, but require support to remain stable. It is likely that babies are not born knowing this basic fact of the universe; nor are they ever clearly taught it. Instead, babies may form an understanding of object support through repeated experiments and then build on this knowledge to learn even more about how objects interact. Though their ranges and tools differ, the baby’s investigation and the scientist’s experiment appear to share the same aim(to learn about the natural world), overall approach (gathering direct evidence from the world), and logic (are my observations what I expected?).

Some psychologists suggest that young children learn about more than just the physical world in this way—that they investigate human psychology and the rules of language using similar means. For example, it may only be through repeated experiments, evidence gathering, and finally overturning a theory, that a baby will come to accept the idea that other people can have different views and desires from what he or she has, for example, unlike the child, Mommy actually doesn’t like Dove chocolate.

     Viewing childhood development as a scientific investigation throws light on how children learn, but it also offers an inspiring look at science and scientists. Why do young children and scientists seem to be so much alike? Psychologists have suggested that science as an effort—the desire to explore, explain, and understand our world — is simply something that comes from our babyhood. Perhaps evolution (进化) provided human babies with curiosity and a natural drive to explain their worlds, and adult scientists simply make use of the same drive that served them as children. The same cognitive (认知的) systems that make young children feel good about figuring something out may have been adopted by adult scientists. As some psychologists put it," It is not that children are little scientists but that scientists are big children."

1.According to some developmental psychologists,          .

A. a baby’s play is nothing more than a game

B. scientific research into babies’ games is possible

C. the nature of babies’ play has been thoroughly investigated

D. a baby’s play is somehow similar to a scientist’s experiment

2.We learn from Paragraph 2 that          .

A. scientists and babies seem to observe the world differently

B. scientists and babies often interact with each other

C. babies are born with the knowledge of object support

D. babies seem to collect evidence just as scientists do

3.Children may learn the rules of language by         .

A. exploring the physical world       B. investigating human psychology

C. repeating their own experiments      D. observing their parents’ behaviors

4.What is the main idea of the last paragraph?

A. The world may be more clearly explained through children’s play.

B. Studying babies’ play may lead to a better understanding of science.

C. Children may have greater ability to figure out things than scientists.

D. One’s drive for scientific research may become stronger as he grows.

5. What is the author’s tone when he discusses the connection between scientists’ research and babies’ play?

A. Convincing.             B. Confused.      

C. Confident.            D. Cautious.

 

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“Who can ever have imagined that someone like me would make it this far?” asked Chad Wood last week during his high school graduation speech as the best student. Chad offered     1   to his fellow classmates to never give upand the words    2   much more to himself. That’s because Chad is deaf, and he told the story of the serious troubles he    3   to graduate first in his class at Harrison High school in Kennesaw, Georgia.

Chad didn’t start to     4   until he was 5, according to his mother, Pam Wood. Although her son was     5   a disadvantage, she was determined not to treat him     6   .“I’ve expected him to do everything every other kid does, and I saw no     7   why he couldn’t,” she told ABC News. “And if he     8   the first time, we just tried again.”

    Chad, 17, worked hard throughout school,     9   no special treatment but sitting at the front of the class and using a special audio system so he could hear the teacher. All his hard work    10   . He received full school fare to Vanderbilt University. “Deafness had taught me a lesson to never    11   ,” he said in the speech. Not when the experts tell you it cannot be done. Not when you have     12   so far behind that escaping seems the only way    13   . Not when achieving your dreams seems an entire    14   .”

Chad spoke for about four minutes, after which he received a standing applause from the class and    15   messages from family, friends and strangers. “They’ve been sending me messages on Facebook, email; they’ve been talking to me in person telling me how it had a     16   on their lives and how they’re really     17   by it,” Chad told ABC News. “It feels     18   . Seeing that my words     19   have a power on someone and that they want to work harder    20   my words makes me feel wonderful.”

1.A. warning       B. description      C. advice       D. information

2.A. analysed     B. meant       C. recognized      D. persuaded

3.A. needed       B. faced       C. consisted      D. foresaw

4.A. cry        B. write       C. smell       D. hear

5.A. at        B. for       C. under       D. by

6.A. deadly       B. kindly       C. differently      D. similarly

7.A. harm       B. reason       C. trouble       D. conclusion

8.A. failed       B. organized      C. succeed      D. blamed

9.A. receive       B. receiving      C. to receive      D. received

10.A. set off       B. dropped off     C. took off      D. paid off

11.A. give in       B. give up      C. give out      D. give away

12.A. waited       B. walked      C. fallen       D. gone

13.A. up       B. off       C. in        D. out

14.A. impossibility    B. success      C. victory       D. possibility

15.A. scientific      B. negative      C. supportive      D. cautious

16.A. reward       B. power       C. source       D. detail

17.A. defeated      B. exposed      C. educated      D. puzzled

18.A. unwilling      B. amazing      C. shocking      D. embarrassing

19.A. actually      B. suddenly      C. strangely      D. extremely

20. A. apart from      B. according to    C. instead of      D. because of

 

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