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It is no doubt that health is the most important thing in our life. As a Chinese proverb go, ＂Health is blessing＂. Should we be always ill in bed, how can we enjoy life?

To keep healthy, we must develop a healthy way of life. First of all, we should keep on doing sports on a regularly basis, because it can strengthen both our body and mind, refresh ourselves and making us work more efficiently. Secondly, we must keep balanced diet to provide our body with various nutrition we need, but we should refuse junk food. Remember, it is through the mouth where diseases enter into our body. Thirdly, a good sleep is also vital to our health. Stay up too late at night often results in poor health. As middle school students, we need better sleep to do better in our lessons.

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is no doubt that health is the most important thing in our life. As a Chinese proverb , ＂Health is blessing＂. Should we be always ill in bed, how we enjoy life?

To keep healthy, we must develop a healthy way of life. First of all, we should keep on doing sports on a basis, because it can strengthen both our body and mind, refresh ourselves and us work more efficiently. Secondly, we must keep balanced diet to provide our body with various nutrition we need, we should refuse junk food. Remember, it is through the mouth diseases enter into our body. Thirdly, a good sleep is also vital to our health. up too late at night often results in poor health. As middle school students, we need better sleep to do better in our lessons.

【解析】第一处：It→There 此处为固定句式There is no doubt that毫无疑问的是……，故将It改为There。

第二处：go→goes 句意：正如一句中国谚语所说……。本句描述的是客观事实，故用一般现在时态。主语proverb为单数名词，故谓语动词用第三人称单数。

第三处：can→could 句意：我们怎么享受我们的生活。should位于句首，在此处是虚拟语气。how could…经常用作表示语气强烈或是责备，how can…只表示根据客观事实的判断。故将can改为could。

第四处：regularly→regular 联系下文basis(基础)可知，此处用形容词作定语。故将regularly改为regular。

第五处：making→make 此处make和前文strength、refresh同为并列谓语，故也用动词原形。

第六处：keep后加a 联系下文＂balanced diet＂可知，此处指的是保持一个均衡的饮食，故加不定冠词。balanced词首音素是辅音，故不定冠词用a。

第七处：but→and 句意：并且我们应该拒绝垃圾食品。联系上下文可知，前后为顺接关系，but但是，表示转折关系。故改为and。

第八处：where→that 本句为强调句，强调疾病是通过口腔进入我们的身体的。故用that构成强调句型的基本框架。

第九处：去掉into enter进入，及物动词，后面直接接宾语。

第十处：Stay→Staying 句意：在晚上熬夜经常会导致身体不适。根据语境可知，此处用动名词作主语。故将Stay改为Staying。