Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Good afternoon, everyone, I feel honor to stand here to share my ideas about the topic of communicate with our parents.

Parents are the people which love us most, so it is necessary to keep a good relationship with them. Here are my suggestions with how to make it easier to communicate with parents.

First, we should respect and trust our parents. Don’t be rude to them even if they had done something wrong. They have been experienced more and always try their best to protect us from dangers. Second, whether we often talk with them about our life and experience, we will know each other better. Third, if sometimes we don’t agree with our parents decisions, we should try to put themselves in their shoes and we will soon understand them. Remember they really want is only the best for us.

Thank you for listening.

Answer

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about the topic of communicate with our parents.

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Parents are the people which love us most，so it is necessary to keep a

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good relationship with them. Here are my suggestions with how to make it

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easier to communicate with parents.

First, we should respect and trust our parents. Don’t be rude to them even if

they had done something wrong. They have been\ experienced more and

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always try their best to protect us from dangers. Second, whether we often talk

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with them about our life and experience, we will know each other better. Third, if

sometimes we don’t agree with our parents decisions, we should try to put

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themselves in their shoes and we will soon understand them. Remember ∧ they

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really want is only the best for us.

Thank you for listening.

【解析】本文是一篇话题为关于如何与父母的交流的演讲稿。

第一处，honor改为honored。 feel honored to do sth. 为…感到荣幸。feel是连系动词，后接形容词作表语，honored adj. 荣幸的。

第二处，communicate改为communicating。the topic of之后应该用动词ing形式做宾语。

第三处， which改为who。考查定语从句。people做先行词，指人，关系代词用who。意为：父母是最爱我们的人。

第四处， with改为on/about。介词用错。on/about 关于…， 就… 方面。下面我就如何更容易地和父母交流说一下我的建议。

第五处， had改为have。时态错误。此处应该用现在完成时态，即使他们做错了一些事情，也不要粗鲁地对待他们。主句用祈使句，是属于现在时态范畴，从句中用现在完成时态，表示过去的事情对现在的影响。

第六处， 将been去掉。experience v. 经历，此处用主动语态。他们经历的更多，总是尽自己最大努力保护我们免受危险。

第七处， whether改为if。此处为条件状语从句，如果我们经常跟他们谈谈我们的生活和经历，我们会彼此更了解对方。if译为“如果”，而whether没有此意。

第八处， parents改为parents’。此处用名词的所有格修饰名词decisions，意为“他们的决定”。

第九处， themselves改为ourselves。反身代词用错。sb. put oneself in sb. else’s shoes为别人设身处地地想，与…换位思考。反身代词ourselves此处做宾语，要跟主语we一致。

第十处，在Remember和they之间加what。what连接主语从句，在主语从句中做want的宾语，what they really want他们真正想要的只是为了我们好。