Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者 （从第 11 处起 ）不计分。

With the development of the Internet, more and more children are addicted to play online games day and night. It does harm not only to their health, especial their eyes, but also to their studies. Comparing with online games, many traditional games benefits kids mentally and physically. They were very popular to several generations, for they learned something valuable and had a fun playing the games. Therefore, the games are losing our appeal now, and so me children even haven’t heard of them. Personally, I think teachers and parents should take measure to limit their children’s Internet time. Let children know harm of online games and the benefits of traditional games. What’s more, we should often organize some traditional activity for children.

Answer

1.play→playing

2.especial→especially

3.Comparing→Compared

4.benefits→benefit

5.to→with

6.had a fun删去 a

7.Therefore→However

8.our→their

9.measure→ measures

10.know和 harm之间加the

【解析】1. 固定搭配：be addicted to sth./doing sth.沉迷于某事或做某事，故把play改为playing。

2. 句意：它不仅伤害了他们的身体，尤其是他们的眼睛，而且也伤害了他们的学习。副词修饰词组，故把especial改为especially。

3. 固定句式：compared with/to…与……相比较，把Comparing改为Compared，注意大写开头。

4. 句意：很多传统的运动对孩子的身心健康是有益的。many traditional games是句子的主语，一般现在时态，后面的谓语动词用复数形式，故benefits改为benefit。

5. 固定词组：be popular with在……中受欢迎，故把to改为with。

6. 固定搭配：have fun (in) doing sth.玩得开心，fun是不可数名词，故删去fun前的a。

7. 句意：然而，现在运动失去了对他们的吸引。前后是一种转折关系，故把Therefore改为However。

8. 句意：然而，现在运动失去了对他们的吸引。故把our改为their。

9. 固定词组：take measures采取措施，故把measure改为measures。

10. 句意：让孩子们知道网上游戏的危害和传统游戏的好处。此处表示特指，故在know和 harm之间加the。

【名师点睛】

本题第３小题考查固定结构：compared to/with...与……相比较。英语中有些分词已成为固定结构，在词性上已转化为介词，使用时应按固定结构对待，不必考虑它们与主语之间的关系。除了compared to/with...，常见的还有以下几种：

judging by/from...根据……判断；由……断定

provided/providing(that)...假如，倘若……；在……条件下；除非

given...倘若……；假定……