Question

假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Many students are now facing with problems like deciding whether to focus on science or art.Not taking the children’s interest or preferences in account, some parents force their children to make the choice as their will, that troubles many students.

Throughout our lives we have to make much choices.As students, we should talk to our parents or teachers especial on life-changing decisions.But when it came down to it, we’re the ones who must live with their choices.On the other hand, parents should try to help their children make the best possible decisions, instead forcing them to do something that against their will.

It depends on students themselves whether they’ll be science students and arts students.Just let their hearts show them the way.

Answer

1.facing改为faced或去掉;

2.in改为into;

3.that改为which;

4.much改为many;

5.especial改为especially;

6.came改为comes;

7.their改为our;

8.instead加上of;

9.that去掉或在that后加is;

10.and改为or.

【解析】1.考查动词。固定短语：be faced with（面对）；或者把face（面对）看成是及物动词可以直接加宾语，故facing改为faced或去掉with.

2. 考查介词。固定短语：take…into account（考虑），故in改为into.

3. 考查连词。非限制性定语从句不能用that引导，要用关系代词which代替前面整个句子。故that改为which.

4. 考查形容词。形容much（许多的）修饰不可数名词，而many（许多的）修饰可数名词，名词choice是可数名词，故much改为many.

5. 考查副词。本句要用副词especially（特别地）作状语，故especial改为especially;

6. 考查动词。本句说的是一般状况，所以从句谓动词也要用一般现在时态，故came改为comes;

7. 考查代词。主语是we，后边人称使用错位，应该用代词our指代主语，故their改为our.

8. 考查介词。副词instead（相反）作状语；而介词短语instead of（代替）后才可接动名短语作宾语，故instead后加上of.

9. 考查连词或动词。可把that去掉，让后边的介词短语against their will作定语；也可以在that后加上is，使之构成定语从句。故that去掉或在that后加is.

10. 考查连词。固定搭配：whether...or…（不管……还是……），故and改为or.