Question

最近你班就高三学生是否应该组织集体春游进行了讨论。以下是讨论的情况。请你用英语写一篇短文，反映讨论结果并谈谈自己的看法，然后发表在你校英语论坛上。

赞成(62%)的理由	反对(38%)的理由
1. 亲近大自然，拓宽视野； 2. 增强沟通、合作能力； 3. 结交新朋友。	1. 占用宝贵的学习时间； 2. 安全很难保证。

注意：词数100左右（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。

Recently, our class has had a discussion about whether Senior Three students should go on a group spring outing.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer

Recently, our class has had a discussion about whether Senior Three students should go on a group spring outing. They take different attitudes towards it.

62% of the students say yes. In their opinion, going on a group spring outing can not only enable them to get close to nature and broaden their horizons, but also help improve communication and cooperation skills. Furthermore, it gives more opportunities to make new friends. However, 38% of the students hold the opposite opinion. They think that they are supposed to concentrate their energies on studying, because the university entrance examinations are around the corner. The outing is a waste of time. Meanwhile, they can’t prepare for every emergency.

As for me, we can benefit a lot from the activity only if safety measures are adopted properly. On the whole, I am in favour of the former.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇命题作文。文章内容要点已经给出。考生在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：1. 通篇以一般过去时和一般现在时为主。2. 要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。3. 注意在文章最后要陈述自己的观点，一定要通过简单的例子作为支撑。否则会显得说服力不够，内容不够丰满。

【范文亮点】

文中采用了“62% of the students say yes”“ 38% of the students hold the opposite opinion ”，表示观点的句；“They think that they are supposed to concentrate their energies on studying, because the university entrance examinations are around the corner”采用了宾语从句和原因状语从句结合使用的办法。

文章使用了“had a discussion about ”“In their opinion”“not only…but also ”“concentrate on”“around the corner”“benefit a lot”“in favour of”“As for me”等高分动词词组。

文中运用了较多高级连接词，例如“Furthermore”“ However”“Meanwhile”“On the whole”。