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Today as I was leaving the church for home, I hear an old man saying he was cold. I was dressing in an expensive scarf. I had been a precious gift to me, so I gave it to him. In my opinion, the happiness what I receive as I see someone else happy in their hearts means many than the scarf itself.
He offered to accompanying me home and we talked all of the way to my house. For me, a material thing doesn't have a meaning until I give them to someone. Make it good one, a truly meaning of love for others.
It was freezing cold that day. At about 9:00，I 1. (drop)off at the visitor center. I intended to explore Tetons National Park 2. (I). However, I was told that there was no bus 3. (travel) to the park from town, so I had to ask for a lift.
Minutes later, a truck stopped beside me, 4. driver offered to take me there. When we came to the park 5.(enter), he handed over his park pass and got me in for free.
6. (cover) in white, Tetons National Park was attractive on that cold winter day. The sun shining and it was 7.(complete) silent. The silence was lovely, but I had to hope that it was possible to catch 8. ride back into town. As a few people passed me at the parking lot, I asked if they had any room in their car 9. if they were heading to town. “Sure! Come on in, we got a space for you!” they replied.
I was grateful 10. their kindness and I was taught again that regardless of where you are in the world，beautifully unconventional things can and do happen.
Dusty is my son Jack’s favorite pet. They have a special connection that is a _______ to see. After she finishes her dinner at night, Dusty will run into Jack’s room to _______ on the pillow beside him. During the day she’ll _______him around, jump into his arms, and even _______ with a “meow” every time he calls her name.
_______ a few weeks ago Dusty began to lose _______. She ate less and less and lost some of her fur. She _______ going after jack around and hid in my daughter's old closet (壁橱). She _______ only to drink water and then quickly returned there. I was _______ that we were going to lost her and prayed to God that she’d return to ________. I didn't want Jack to lose his furry friend. ________, after a few weeks she started to spend time outside the ________ again. In addition, her ________ recovered. Soon her fur grew back and she gained weight. Once again she became my son’s constant ________ and I thanked God for bringing her back to him.
I can ________ why she’d gone off by herself to take the time to heal (康复）from her illness. There have been many times in my own life when fear, sickness and sadness have beaten me and I’ve just needed to find a quiet in my own ________ to think and to heal.
________, every time I’ve done so my heart is filled with God’s ________，making me better and stronger than I was before.
When life heats you down, don’t ________. Go within. Allow God's love to fill you and to heal you. And then go out and ________ that love with the world.
1.A. delight B. shock C. honor D. prize
2.A. hide B. sleep C. hunt D. guard
3.A. look for B. run into C. follow D. guide
4.A. answer B. challenge C. reward D. impress
5.A. Besides B. Instead C. Therefore D. However
6.A. memory B. sight C. weight D. hearing
7.A. delayed B. risked C. escaped D. stopped
8.A. set out B. came out C. called put D. work out
9.A. embarrassed B. disappointed C. worried D. relieved
10.A. health B. safety C. calm D. peace
11.A. Mercifully B. Interestingly C. Thankfully D. Undoubtedly
12.A. pillow B. closet C. suitcase D. kitchen
13.A. appetite B. pride C. confidence D. curiosity
14.A. relative B. companion C. guarantee D. understand
15.A. prove B. forecast C. guarantee D. understand
16.A. view B. soul C. choice D. opinion
17.A. Honestly B. Eventually C. Joyfully D. Regretfully
18.A. behavior B. happiness C. love D. words
19.A. keep on B. turn back C. march on D. exchange
20.A. share B. compare C. link D. exchange
Making a lifestyle change is challenging, especially when you want to transform many things at once. Here are some tips to help you:
￭Make a plan that you can stick to. Your plan is a map that will guide you on this journey of change.1.When making your plan, be specific. Want to exercise more? Detail the time of day when you can take walks and how long you’ll walk. Post your plan where you’ll most often see it as a reminder.
￭Start small. Break down your goals into small. Break down your goals into small, manageable steps. Is your long-term goal to lose 20 pounds within the next five months? 2.If you’d like to eat healthier, consider a goal for the week replacing dessert with a healthier option, like fruit or yogurt. At the end of the week, you’ll week successful knowing you have met your goal.
￭Change one behavior at a time. Replacing unhealthy behaviors with healthy ones requires time.3. To improve your success, focus on one goal or change at a time. As new healthy behaviors become a habit, try to add another goal that works toward time overall change.
￭4.Accepting help from those who care about you and will listen strengthens your commitment. If you feel unable to meet your goals on your own, consider seeking help from a psychologist. Psychologists are uniquely trained to understand the connection between the mind and body, as well as the factors that promote behavior change.
￭Making the changes that you want takes time and commitment, but you can do it. Just remember that no one is perfect. Minor missteps on the road to your goals are normal and okay.5.
A. Be kind to yourself.
B. Ask for support.
C. Be determined to recover and get back on track.
D. You can even think of it as an adventure.
E. A good weekly goal would be to lose one pound a week.
F. You've tried before, but without feeling much success.
G. Many people run into problems when they try to change too much too fast.
A recent study led by researchers from the National University of Singapore (NUS) has found a clear link between the color of a taxi and its accident rate. An analysis of 36 months of detailed taxi, driver and accident data from two fleets of yellow and blue taxis in Singapore suggested that yellow taxis have fewer accidents than blue taxis. The higher visibility (能见度） of yellow makes it less difficult for drivers to avoid getting into accidents with yellow taxis, leading to a lower accident rate.
The study was led by Prof Ho. To test whether there was a relationship between the color of a taxi and the number of accidents the taxi had, the research team analysed data collected by the largest taxi company in Singapore. The researchers found that yellow taxis have about 6.1 fewer accidents per 1,000 taxis per month.
They also studied the economic effect of changing the color of the entire fleet of taxis to yellow. The Singapore taxi company involved in the study owns about 16,700 taxis in a ratio (比例) of one yellow to three blue taxis. If a commercial decision is made to switch from blue to yellow taxis, 76.6 fewer accidents will occur per month or 917 fewer accidents per year.
Assuming an average repair cost of $1,000 per car and a downtime of six days, the color of all taxis to yellow could produce an annual saving of $2 million.
“We are eager to continue to validate(证实) the findings of our study by looking at the use of yellow in other types of public transport, such as school buses. For example, we hope to compare the accident rates of yellow school buses against those of other colors to find out if yellow is indeed a safer color for school buses. Besides, we’re also interested to look at private-hire vehicles and do a comparison of the accident rates of vehicles that are of different colors, ”explained Prof Ho.
1.Why do yellow taxis result in fewer accidents?
A. Because yellow signals a warning of danger.
B. Because yellow can be seen more easily.
C. Because drivers tend to be more careful in yellow taxis.
D. Because people act more quickly in yellow surroundings.
2.What’s Prof Ho’s study based on?
A. Physical risks taxi passengers experience.
B. The economic effect of changing taxi color.
C. Personal reports from taxi drivers worldwide.
D. Data from Singapore's largest taxi company.
3.What do Prof Ho’s words in the last paragraph suggest?
A. School buses should be painted yellow.
B. Their findings are worth popularizing.
C. Their study will be furthered.
D. Yellow should be widely used in public transport.
4.What can be the best title for the text?
A. Safer to ride in yellow taxis
B. Caution: yellow taxis ahead
C. Why are yellow Taxis preferred?
D. How can colors help prevent accidents?
Every March, the country celebrates the accomplishments of women in American history. Even though these accomplishments go back a long way, most schools didn’t start focusing on women pioneers and their achievements until recently. Today, most colleges offer classes in women’s history and most schools teach kids about the many contributions women have made to our country.
On March 19, 1911，a German woman named Clara Zetkin organized the very first International Women’s Day. Inspired by American working women, the annual event took on the causes of peace and women’s rights. In the 1960s, the women's movement caused women to wonder why they weren’t included in the history books.
By the 1970s, more female historians began to look back at the contributions of women in history. In 1978，a California school district started Women’s History Week to promote the teaching of women’s history. School officials picked the week of March 8 to include International Women's Day. It was so popular that, in 1981, Congress passed a law making the week a celebration for the entire country. The concept of studying women's history continued to grow in popularity. In 1987, a group of women asked Congress to amplify the celebration. That same year, Congress declared the entire month of March National Women's History Months
Today, schools and communities across the country celebrate the month with special lessons and activities designed to teach the ways women have helped shape the U.S. The women who have worked hard to make women’s History Month a reality would like to see women’s history all year, not just every March. In 1996, the National Women’s History Museum was founded. It’s a non-profit organization devoted to preserving and celebrating the various contributions of women in history. The organization is working with Congress to open a permanent museum site in Washington, D. C.
1.What does the first paragraph imply?
A. Women's achievements used to be ignored in America.
B. More women pioneers are needed in America.
C. Celebrating women's achievements has a long history in America.
D. Few American schools pay attention to women s contributions.
2.According to the text, International Women’s Day ________.
A. is held every second year
B. has a history of over a century
C. was started by an American
D. was a product of women's movement
3.Which of the following words can replace the underlined word “amplify” in Paragraph 3?
A. organize B. support
C. expand D. protect
4.What can we know about the National Women’s History Museum from the text?
A. It was set up less than two decades ago.
B. It focuses on women’s historic contributions.
C. It is an organization aimed at making profits.
D. It has a permanent site in Washington, D. C.
