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短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
A little kid fell into a lake while she was playing with her little friends. They were too frightening to know what to do next. Unfortunately, a pretty lady and a man passed by and saw the drowning girl. The man immediate dived into the water and took the girl to the bank and at a same time, the lady called the ambulance on time. Before the ambulance came, the lady, who proved to be a nurse, performing first aid to the kid. A few of minutes later, the kid sent to the nearest hospital and finally saved. The story is a good example where first aid can make a lot of differences. From it, we know it is necessary to know basic first aid skills so that we can be better preparing for an emergency.
During the Tang Dynasty(618—907),there was a minister named Li Linfu.He was very good at flattering people,so his official position was raised higher and higher and he 1. (eventual) became the prime minister.2..,Li was a violent and cruel man.When he talked with people he always wore a sweet smile,but he 3.. (make) up evil ideas in his mind.
One day,Li learned that 4.. beautiful woman was put in prison.He sent for a prison officer and ordered him to set the woman free.The man followed the order and Li took the woman home.
Later,someone reported the case to the emperor.The prison officer was very afraid because he 5..(know) he had committed a crime by 6.. (set) the criminal free.He went to Li for help,but Li ignored him and asked the man not to disturb him any more.The man was so disappointed that he hanged 7.. (he).
Hearing the tragic suicide of the prison officer,another officer wanted to reveal the 8.. (true) to the emperor.Li,however,knew of this plan and began to make false accusations against the officer.The foolish emperor believed Li’s words and exiled(流放) the officer 9.. a distant land.
The idiom “hide a dagger in a smile” is used 10.. (describe) a person with a murderous intention behind his/her smile.
When Monty Roberts was a child, his daddy as a horse fitness instructor was moving from ranch(农场) to ranch, training horses. ________, the boy’s education was frequently interrupted. One day, in school his ________ told him to create and write about what he wished to be when he grew up. He didn’t ________ one minute and wrote a seven-page paper about his trying to be a manager of a horse ranch with a plan in ________.
Soon after, he ________ his paper back with an “F”. After class he came to the instructor and asked, “Why did I ________ an F?” The instructor responded, “These dreams are too ________ for a boy, who does not have any money, no information and who comes from a very ________ family. There is absolutely no ________ that you’ll achieve your great goals when you grow up.” Then the teacher told Monty to ________ the paper with an realistic attitude.
The boy went home and asked his daddy what he should do. His dad ________, “This decision is important for you, which means you have to ________ your own decision.”
After several days and nights the boy ________ exactly the same paper to his teacher. No ________ were made. He said, “Keep your ________ and I am going to keep my dream.”
Now Monty Roberts ________ a 4,000-square-foot house in the center of a 200-acre horse ranch and even now he has that school ________ framed(给……加框) on the fireplace.
Remember don’t ever let someone tell you you can’t do ________. Not even your teachers. You got a ________; you got to protect it. People can’t do something themselves so they want to tell you you can’t do it. If you want something, go to ________ it.
1.A. HoweverB. ConsequentlyC. PossiblyD. Unluckily
2.A. teacherB. motherC. fatherD. monitor
3.A. makeB. loseC. hesitateD. talk
4.A. lengthB. widthC. colorD. depth
5.A. receivedB. acceptedC. respondedD. demanded
6.A. preserveB. reserveC. getD. require
7.A. detailedB. specificC. strangeD. unrealistic
8.A. wealthyB. poorC. specialD. complete
9.A. possibilityB. needC. doubtD. evidence
10.A. reciteB. retellC. rewriteD. review
11.A. commentedB. decidedC. promisedD. answered
12.A. makeB. obeyC. respectD. examine
13.A. readB. broughtC. suggestedD. approved
14.A. improvementsB. studiesC. remarksD. plans
15.A. ruleB. regulationC. gradeD. style
16.A. cleansB. witnessesC. ownsD. admires
17.A. pictureB. photoC. contractD. paper
18.A. nothingB. somethingC. everythingD. anything
19.A. dreamB. friendC. propertyD. thought
20.A. takeB. purchaseC. obtainD. control
Anger can feel like its eating you up inside as it practically ruins your entire day 1. Let's cool it a little shall we?
2. Effectively, to constantly water it would mean you've created the habit of anger. You're probably even addicted to it. To stop being so angry, you've to break out of anger. Stop watering the angry seed within, live your life and start planting other seeds!
Anger is not a primary emotion. It's secondary. 3. What is it? Fear? Rejection? Sadness? Guilt? It's going to be terrifying, but you've to be honest with yourself and start asking the bigger questions in order to overcome anger.
For every minute you are angry you lose sixty seconds of happiness. It's only logical. Getting angry is not allowing other positive emotions to come in and that is time and space you'll never get back. And life is way too short to be pissed off(使生气) all the time. 4.
Happiness cannot come from hatred or anger. Nobody can say, “Today I am happy because this morning I was angry.” 5. They can say “Today I am not very happy, because I lost my temper this morning.” This is so straight-forward. Anger in the end, cannot sustain(维持) you. It can perhaps propel you with energy, but if you use it to create more anger, then happiness will never come to you.
A. On the contrary, people feel uneasy and sad.
B. You’re responsible for your anger.
C. You’ve found the root cause of your anger.
D. People will find a way to make you angry.
E. while filling your head with a bunch of angry, negative thoughts.
F. and it states how easy it is to be angry.
G. You're going to die eventually, so be smart about it!
A trip across the Pacific will guarantee you a different experience with a tipping(给小费) culture you’ve never come across in China.
In the US,giving a little extra money to service workers on top of your bill is a common practice.
Though US national law requires that businesses pay workers at least $7.25 (45 yuan) per hour,employees receiving tips—often waiters and waitresses—are the exceptions.They usually only receive at least $2.13 an hour,and tips make up the difference.As The Wall Street Journal put it:“The American system of tipping holds the promise of great rewards for waiting staff.”
So how should you tip if you are in the US?
Normally you pay tips as a percentage of the bill.Offering an extra 15 percent of the bill to the waiter or waitress in a restaurant and to the delivery man or woman is customary and expected.You can offer more for great service and less for poor service.
Yet there is an exception.For take-out food,you don’t have to provide tips,though some people say that filling an order still requires work and time that deserve a little extra—but maybe a little less.
Tips are not expected at fast food restaurants,pizza parlors,cafés or ice cream shops either,though a tip jar might be right by the cash register (收银机).Don’t feel obligated to throw some money in,but also remember that it doesn’t hurt.Those workers do not rely on tips.
Other service workers also receive tips.For taxi drivers,15 percent is the norm (标准),more if they help with your bags.Hairdressers often receive about 15 percent of the bill.The same goes for spa therapists(理疗师) and tour guides.
Today,you can even pay tips on a credit card.When receiving a copy of the bill to sign,you are free to fill in how much you’d like to tip.
Though thinking about when to tip and how much you should tip causes a big headache for many Chinese people,it’s important to bear in mind that as long as you show respect and use your reasoning,things will be just fine.
1.What is the article mainly about?
A. How tipping culture started in the US.
B. How to give tips properly in the US.
C. New ways to give tips in the US.
D. The different attitudes that Chinese people and Americans have toward tipping.
2.Which of the following is said to be against the norm of tipping in the US?
A. Paying waiters and waitresses less than $7.25 per hour.
B. Ignoring the tip jar at fast food restaurants,cafés,or ice cream shops.
C. Tipping taxi drivers less than 15% because of poor service.
D. Refusing to give tips to your tour guide.
3.The underlined word “obligated” in Paragraph 7 probably means .
A. being forced to do something B. being grateful for something
C. being surprised at something D. being embarrassed about something
4.According to the author,Chinese consumers .
A. don’t necessarily have to follow the tipping rules in the US
B. should use their credit cards to give tips
C. must argue about the amount of tip they have to pay
D. should take it easy and give the correct tips for different occasions
