Question

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;

      2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

A little kid fell into a lake while she was playing with her little friends. They were too frightening to know what to do next. Unfortunately, a pretty lady and a man passed by and saw the drowning girl. The man immediate dived into the water and took the girl to the bank and at a same time, the lady called the ambulance on time. Before the ambulance came, the lady, who proved to be a nurse, performing first aid to the kid. A few of minutes later, the kid sent to the nearest hospital and finally saved. The story is a good example where first aid can make a lot of differences. From it, we know it is necessary to know basic first aid skills so that we can be better preparing for an emergency.

Answer

1.frightening →frightened

2.Unfortunately →Fortunately

3.immediate →immediately

4.a →the

5.on →in

6.performing →performed

7.去掉of

8.sent前加was

9.differences →difference

10.preparing →prepared

【解析】

试题分析：一个小孩不慎落水，幸好路人帮忙小孩获救。故事告诉我们掌握必要急救知识的重要性。

1.frightening →frightened.考查形容词。frightening“令人恐惧的”，修饰物；frightened“害怕的，受惊的”，修饰人。此处修饰孩子们用frightened，故frightening 改为frightened。

2.Unfortunately →Fortunately.考查副词。一名小孩不慎落水，其他孩子不知怎么办。恰好两个成年人经过，应该是“幸运地”，故Unfortunately改为Fortunately。

3.immediate →immediately.考查副词。此处修饰动词dived用副词，指马上下水救人，故immediate改为immediately。

4. →the.考查冠词。at the same time“同时”，是固定短语，故a改为the。

5. →in.考查介词短语。on time按时，in time及时。此处指及时叫救护车，故on改为in。

6.performing →performed.考查动词形式。句中主语是the lady，缺少谓语动词，performing不能作谓语，根据全文时态用动词过去式performed作谓语，故performing改为performed。

7..考查介词。此处表示“几分钟”用a few 直接修饰minutes，故去掉of。

8.sent前加was.考查时态语态。句中the kid和动词send是被动关系，指孩子被送到医院，用一般过去时的被动，故sent前加was。

9.differences →difference.考查名词。make difference“有区别，关系重大” difference此处为不可数名词，故differences改为difference。

10.preparing →prepared.考查动词形式。preparing 表示动作正在进行，be prepared for…为……做准备，过去分词 prepared 用于系表结构，意思为“为……做好准备；打算”，故preparing →prepared.