Question

假如你是李华，南昌二中的一名学生，得知可向国际儿童基金会(Foundation)申请一个经费为2000元的扶贫项目(poverty-relief program)，帮助贫困地区的儿童。你感兴趣，准备申请。请根据以下要点写一篇文章：

1）个人的基本情况和申请理由；

2）你对申请项目的具体设想和项目经费的使用计划；

3）你的愿望。联系方式：[e-mail]

注意：1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3. 开头语和结尾语已为你写好。

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Li Hua

Answer

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Li Hua, a student currently studying at Nanchang No.2 Middle School. I am writing to apply for the 2000 yuan's worth of fund aimed at helping those students who are financially disadvantaged.

Being raised in families that don’t have to worry about putting food on the table need not mean ignoring our less fortunate peers. On this account, we would appreciate it if you could sponsor our poverty-relief endeavor. The following is how we would go about using the money. We would spend 1500 yuan purchasing some stationery for the needy students in a poverty-stricken area. The remainder of the fund would be used to invite a motivational speaker who was to talk about how to lift oneself out of poverty by making right academic and professional decisions. Our efforts might make a difference in the lives of some young people, but who knows what butterfly effects these young minds may have on tomorrow's world?

We would be grateful if you could reply at your earliest convenience. You could contact me at 2016hope @icf.org.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是提纲类作文，要点已给出。成文时要注意：1.文章主要用第一人称；2.时态：灵活变换；3.文章的内容要点要齐全：（1）个人的基本情况和申请理由；（2）你对申请项目的具体设想和项目经费的使用计划；（3）你的愿望。4.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，以提高文章的档次；5.注意使用一些连接词，使得文章表达自然、流畅。6.注意文章的字数控制，100单词左右。

写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：文章运用了currently, apply for, aimed at, appreciate, motivational, convenience等词汇及定语从句who are financially disadvantaged；that don’t have to worry about putting food on the table need not mean ignoring our less fortunate peers；who was to talk about how to lift oneself out of poverty by making right academic and professional decisions. 宾语从句who knows what butterfly effects these young minds may have on tomorrow's world? 表语从句The following is how we would go about using the money.

考点：应用文写作。

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应用文写作指导

应用文写作题目的设计形式多种多样，一般通过图画、表格、提纲等形式展示表达的话题及相关信息和主要内容，一般都要有一定的汉语提示和要求。写作内容大都包括对信息内容的客观描述，还要发表自己的观点和看法；有时要求提出解决问题的办法或建议。

应用文的写作要注意以下几个方面：

1、写作的前提是明确目的，以便合理的安排文章内容和结构。除了感谢信、道歉信、邀请信、推荐信、投诉信、求职信等目的较明确外，发言稿、通知、调查报告等也要考虑写作文章的用途或听众与读者的需求。

2、写作的关键是仔细审题，通过审题，得出图画、图表或提纲提示信息，并选准表达要点，使其很好的描述现象，分析问题，解决问题，达到写作的目的。

3、注意篇章结构的整体安排：开篇点题，表明写作的目的（一般给出）；描述事物的顺序和思路（按照审题得出的表达要点合理安排，要符合客观实际和人们的认知规律）；合适自然的结尾（首尾呼应，提出解决问题的方法或建议）。

4、注意应用文的语言要规范、准确，要得体；选词要丰富，适量使用结构稍复杂的长短句式，如倒装句、强调句和定语从句等，确保写作信息的含量；注意过度与衔接，确保行文连贯，提高写作的质量。

5、选择恰当的人称和时态：以第一、三人称为主，主要选用现在时态。