Question

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。

      2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Childhood is a time when there are little duties. If a child has good parents, he is fed, looked after, and loved no matter when he may do. It's impossible for him to be given such much again in his later life. But a child is not so free to do as he wishes it. He is continually being told not to do this, not to do that, or being punished for what he had done wrong. When he starts to make their own living, he becomes free from the rules of school and parents. Therefore, he can no longer expect others to pay his food, his clothes, and his room. He has to work hard to live comfortable. If so, he can have the great happiness of build up his own position in society.

Answer

1.little→few

2.when→what

3.such→so

4.去掉it

5.had→has

6.their→his

7.Therefore→However

8.pay后加for

9.comfortable→comfortably

10.build→building

【解析】

试题分析：文章讲述了孩子们的成长过程及每阶段的思想变化。

1.little→few.考查形容词。little修饰不可数名词，few修饰可数名词。此处修饰可数名词duties用few，故little改为few。

2.when→what.考查代词。此处表示不管他做什么，他都被父母喂养、照顾、和爱。表示做的内容不是时间，故when改为what。

3.→so.考查副词。Such+a╱an+adj.+n.后面要有名词，so修饰形容词或副词。此处修饰much用so，故such改为so。

4..考查代词。此处表示“正如他希望的”，后面不需要加宾语，故去掉it。

5.→has.考查时态。主句是现在时，从句根据意思表示到现在他已经做错的事，用现在完成时，故had改为has。

6.→his.考查代词。与句中主语he一致，指他谋生用his修饰living。故their改为his。

7.Therefore→However.考查连词。当他自己谋生时，摆脱了来自学校和家庭的规则约束。他不再期望别人给他买东西。前后句是转折关系，不是因果。故Therefore改为However。

8..考查固定搭配。pay for sth.“为某物付款”，故pay后加for。

9.comfortable→comfortably.考查副词。此处修饰动词live用副词，指舒适地生活。故comfortable改为comfortably。

10.→building.考查动词形式。句中of是介词，其后用动名词作宾语，故build改为building。