Question

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：把缺词处加个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

It isn’t hard to grow up into a responsible members of society. I can well remember an incident that happens on a rainy Sunday afternoon. I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting the green light at a crossing when a girl about ten was knocked on by a passing car, it drove off quickly. A man immediately rushed to a girl to give her first aid and I joined in without hesitation. Luckily she was not badly injured but we sent her to the nearest hospital. Comparing with the escaped driver, I am proud of what I did.

As a member of the society, I am convinced of that being responsible is that it takes to make a better society.

Answer

1.members→member

2.happens→happened

3.waiting后加for

4.on→down

5.it→which

6.a→the

7.but→and

8.Comparing→Compared

9.convince后面的of 去掉

10.that→what

【解析】

试题分析：文章讲述了作者目睹车祸发生，司机逃逸，作者和路人好心帮助受害女孩的故事，并谈到了社会责任问题。

1.members→member.考查名词单复数。句意：成长为一名有责任的成员并不难。因为前面有a，用单数形式。故members改为member。

2.happens→happened.考查动词的时态。句意：我记得这件事发生在一个下雨的周日下午。事情发生在过去，用一般过去时。故happens改为happened。

3.waiting后加for.考查不及物动词。wait是不及物动词，后面跟宾语时要加介词for，故waiting后加for。

4.on→down.考查固定搭配。knock on“敲”，knock down sb 撞倒某人，此处表示女孩被车撞倒，故on改为down。

5.it→which.考查定语从句。两句之间是逗号，而且没有连词，故判断后一句是非限制性定语从句，a passing car是先行词，定语从句drove off quickly缺少主语，故用which来引导。故it改为which。

6.a→the.考查冠词。girl因为上文已经提到，此处表示特指。故a改为the。

7.but→and.考查连词。句意：幸运地是她受伤不严重并且被送到最近的医院。两个句子是并列结构，故but改为and。

8.Comparing→Compared.考查非谓语动词。句意：与逃跑的司机相比，我为我自己的所作所为而自豪。此处表示被比较，故Comparing改为Compared。

9.convince后面的of 去掉.考查固定短语。convince of sth 确信某事；convince that 后面加句子。此处后面是句子，所以去掉of。

10.that→what.考查表语从句。句意：作为社会的一员，我意识到责任是使社会更美好所需要的。根据take缺少宾语，用what来引导。故that改为what。