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短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

   2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

A discussion about hiking had been held in our class. Some students think that hiking during vacations can make people feel healthier, fresher or more harmonious with the nature. They find themselves deep attracted by the beauty of nature. They can also be relaxing by walking in deep mountains. But nowadays some hikers even begin to explore the places people have ever been to, and accidents have happened now and then because a poor knowledge of hiking. Some hikers even lost their life. The other students in our class think it not safe to organize so dangerous activities. They make suggestions what laws should be passed and hikers should be trained before they attend the activities.

 

1.had改为has 2.or改为and 3.删除nature前面的the 4.deep改为deeply 5.relaxing改为relaxed 6.ever改为never 7.because后接of 8.life改为lives 9.so改为such 10.what改为 that 【解析】 试题分析:本文属于说明文,主要介绍了远足这一项运动对人身体的好处以及危险,建议要通过立法来规范这一项运动。 1.had改为has 考查时态。原文中使用了过去完成时,该时态表示“过去的过去”,但是本文使用了一般现在时为主的时态,并没有这种含义。在我们班级进行了这样的讨论。 2.or改为and 考查连词。本句表示三个形容词的并列,远足让人们感觉更健康,更有活力和自然也更和谐。 3.删除nature前面的the 考查冠词。名词nature自然,这是一个抽象名词,要单独使用,不需要接冠词。 4.deep改为deeply 考查副词。本句中使用副词deeply表示抽象的程度很深,而deep表示的具体的深度;句意:他们发现自己被自然的美景深深地影响了。 5.relaxing改为relaxed 考查形容词。过去分词转换的形容词relaxed通常修饰人或与人有关的事物,而relaxing通常修饰事物。句意:在深山中行走,他们感觉很放松。 6.ever改为never 考查上下文串联。句意:但是现在一些远足者甚至开始探索以前人们没有去过的地方。 7.because后接of 考查介词短语。连词because后面要接从句表示原因,而because of后面要接名词或者名词短语表示原因。本句中后面是名词短语a poor knowledge of hiking.,所以使用介词短语because of。 8.life改为lives 考查名词单复数。当名词life表示生命的时候,是一个可数名词;当life表示生活的时候,是一个不可数名词。本句中life表示生命,前面有their修饰,说明使用复数形式。句意:一些远足者甚至失去了生命。 9.so改为such 考查固定结构。可以使用such修饰有形容词修饰的名词,so的后面通常套接形容词或者副词。本文中such dangerous activities意为“如此危险的活动”。 10.what改为that 考查同位语从句。本句中that引导同位语从句,在句中不充当任何成分,而what属于名词性从句的连接代词,在名词性从句要充当主语、宾语或表语等成分,不能省略。 【名师点睛】 本文第10题考查了what和that引导同位语从句的用法,实际上what 和that 都可以引导名词性从句。 一.在引导名词性从句时,从属连词that一般要注意三个不(three nos): 1.不省略(no ellipsis) 当从属连词that引导主语从句、表语从句和同位语从句时,that不省略。 1) That he was able to come made us happy. (That 引导主语从句不可省略) 2)The truth is that I didn't go there. (that引导表语从句不可省略) 3)The news that our team has won is true. (that引导同位语从句不可省略) 但在非正式文体中that 引导宾语从句时可以省略,除下列两种情况外: that在宾语从句中不能省略的情况. (1). 在主+谓+it(形式宾语)+宾补+that, 从句(真正宾语) 的句型中不省略. Eg: 4) He made it quite clear that he preferred to study English.(that不可以省略) 他很明确地说他宁愿学习英语。 (2). 由连词and连接的两个由that引导 的宾语从句中, 则第二个宾语从句前的that不省略。 5) He told me that he would come and that he would come on time.(第一个That可以省略,但第二个that不可以省略。)他告诉我他将来而且他将准时来。 2.不作成分(no component)that 在名词性从句中不作任何句子成分。 6)Sydney kept his promise that he would always do anything he could for Lucie to make sure of her happiness.(that在句中引导同位语从句,但在句中不作任何成分) 7))That you don't like him is none of my business. (that在句中引导主语从句,但在句中不作任 何成分,也不省略) 3. 没词义(no meaning) that 在名词性从句中没有汉语意思。 8)That she is a rich woman is known to us. (that在句中引导主语从句,但在句中没有汉语意义) 她是一个很有钱的女子,这一点我们都知道。 9)The thought that he might fail in the exam worried him. (that在句中引导同位语从句,但在句中没有汉语意义)他也许会考试失败,这一想法使他很担心。 二.在引导名词性从句时, What一般要注意一个不(one no),一个有(meaning),一个作(component): 1.不省略 what 引导名词性从句时,what 在句中不省略。这一用法与that 用法不尽相同。 10) What I had for breakfast today was rice with egg. (what 在句中引导主语从句,what 不省略) 11)----I think it’s going to be a big problem. ----Yes , it could be . ----I wonder what we can do about. (what在句中引导宾语从句,但在句中不省略) 2.有词义 what 引导名词性从句时,有词义。一般是“----的东西/事情/话等”这一用法与that 用法不一样 eg. 1) This is what she wanted to show us. (what在句中引导表语从句,在句中有词义,意思是“----的东西、事情)这是她想让我们看的东西。 12)What the teacher said had a good effect on the children. (what在句中引导主语从句,在句中有词义,意思是“----的东西、事情)老师所说的话对孩子们有很好的作用。 3.作成分 what 在引导名词性从句时,在从句中充当成分。这一用法与that 用法不一样。 13)It doesn’t matter what he said.( it 是形式主语,what 在句中引导主语从句。 What 在主语从句中作said 的宾语。) 14)It was true ______Alice did surprised her mother. A. that what B. what that C. that that D. all what 评析:这一题正确答案是A。it在句中是形式主语,that引导的是主语从句that Alice did surprised her mother.,在这个主语从句当中,what 又引导了主语从句what Alice did, what在从句中作did 的宾语。 三.要特别提醒同学们的两点: 1. What所引导的从句可以在介词后作宾语,而that从句一般不可以。 15)After months of voyage ,Columbus arrived in _____later proved to be a new continent. A. where B. which C. what D. that 评析:答案是C。因为在介词in 后面,应该用what引导的宾语从句,what在宾语从句 中作主语。而that不可以这样用。 16) On stepping into his room, he was astonished to find the floor covered with _____looked like tiny insects. A. that B. something C. what D. anything 评析:答案是C。因为在介词with 后面,应该用what引导的宾语从句,what在宾语从句中作主语。而that不可以这样用。 2.that可以引导定语从句,而且是定语从句引导词中的顶梁柱,它在定语从句中要充当成分,通常作定语从句中的主语、宾语。同时that也可以引导名词性从句,在名词性从句中that 不充当成分。 但What不可以引导定语从句。它只可以引导名词性从句,在句中相当于 what =all that ,what 在名词性从句中充当成分,常常作主语、宾语和表语。 17).All _____I want to know is what he meant . A. that B. which C. what D. whatever 评析:答案是A.本题是that引导的定语从句。而what不可以引导定语从句。What=all that .又因为先行词是all ,故其后不可以接which 引导的定语从句。而. Whatever=anything that /no matter what 从意义和语法都不符合。所以只能选A,that. 18) ______impressed me most was ______such a little boy could play the violin so well. A. That what B. What that C. That that D. What what 评析:答案是B.第一空是what 引导的主语从句,并在主语从句中作主语。第二空是 that 引导的表语从句,that在表语从句中不省略,不作成分,也没词义。 要真正掌握What 和that 在名词性从句中的用法,还得多多操练,熟能生巧(Practice makes perferct)。 考点:考查短文改错
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