Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改 10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

With the development of the Internet, more and more children are addicted to play online games day and night. It does harm not only to their health, especial their eyes, but also to their studies.

   Comparing with online games, many traditional games benefits kids mentally and physically. They were very popular to several generations, for they learned something valuable and had a fun playing the games. Therefore, the games are losing our appeal now,  and some children even haven’t heard of them.

    Personally, I think teachers and parents should take measure to limit their children's Internet time. Let children know harm of online games and the benefits of traditional games. What's more, we should often organize traditional activities for children.

Answer

1.play→playing

2.especial→especially

3.Comparing→Compared

4.benefits→benefit

5.to→with

6.had a fun删去 a

7.Therefore→However

8.our→their

9.measure→ measures

10.know和 harm之间加the

【解析】

【试题分析】

1. 句意：随着因特网的发展，越来越多的孩子对玩网络游戏上瘾。are addicted to对…上瘾，这里to是介词，故play→playing。

2. 句意：网络游戏不仅对他们身体有害，特别是眼睛，而且对学习有害。这里用副词作状语，故especial→especially。

3. 句意：和网络游戏相比，很多传统的游戏有益于孩子的身心健康。compared to/with和…相比。故Comparing→Compared。

4. benefits→benefit 考察主谓一致。此句主语many traditional games复数名词，故benefits→benefit。

5. popular with受……欢迎，故to→with。

6. a fun删去 a 考查固定结构。had fun玩的开心。这里fun是不可数名词，故删去 a。

7. 句意：但是这些游戏正在失去它们的吸引力。根据句意可知Therefore→However。

8.

9. measure→ measures句意：我认为老师和家长应该采取措施来限制孩子们的上网时间。take measures采取措施，故measure→ measures。

10. harm之间加the本题考察冠词。句意：让孩子们了解网络游戏的害处以及传统游戏的益处。这里害处和益处都是特指the harm of online games和the benefits of traditional games。故know和 harm之间加the。

考点：短文改错。

【名师点睛】

compare to / compare with

这两个短语都有“比较”之意。

compare to 表示“比喻为…”、“比拟”，是指出两者之间的关系或相似。例如：

We often compare a teacher to a candle．我们常把老师比喻成蜡烛。

Chinese people compare Maozedong to the sun.中国人把毛泽东比作太阳。

Poets have compared sleep to death. 诗人将睡眠比作死。

Books can be compared to friends.书可以比喻为朋友。

compare with则表示“把…和…相比”，“比较”，是指研究评判人与人之间、事物与事物之间相同或相异的程度。例如：

Please compare your translation with the model translation on the blackboard.

请把你们的翻译和黑板上的翻译例子相比较。

He compared his camera with mine.他把他的照相机跟我的比较。

The boy always compared his toys with other boys’toys.

这男孩总把他的玩具和其它男孩的玩具相比较。

二者相同的地方在于：compare的过去分词短语形式用作状语时,不管同类还是异类,compared with和compared to都可以用.例：

Compared with/to western countries,China uses materials very carefully.和西方相比,中国使用物资很节省.