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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Here is my idea about how a friend is like. Firstly, a friend is someone you can share your secrets. If you tell him a secret, never will he talks about it with anybody else. Besides, a friend is always good listener when you need one. After hear your sad stories, he will say some words that is nice and warm. Still, your happiness makes him happily too. What’s more, a good friend is willing to offer the help to which you need, or can at least give you some advices. In a word, friends are those you like and trust, and you will enjoy every minute that you spent with them.

 

1.how→what 2.在secrets之后加with 3.talks→talk 4.在always之后加a 5.hear→hearing 6.is→are 7.happily→happy 8.去掉to 9.advices→advice 10.spent→ spend 【解析】 试题分析:本文讲的是“一个朋友应该是什么样子”。 1.→what 由what引导宾语从句,从句中like缺宾语,缺少引导词,故把how改为what。 2. 3.→talk will后须加动词原形,故把talks改为talk。 4. 5.→hearing after是介词,后接名词或动词-ing形式,故把hear改为hearing。 6.→ are that代指先行词words,所以谓语动词要用复数。故把is改为are。 7.→happy 形容词作宾语补足语。故把happily改为happy。 8. 9.→advice advice是不可数名词。故把advices改为advice。 10.→ spend 前后时态须一致,前面用一般现在时,此处也要用一般现在时态,故把spent改为spend。 【学法指导】 短文改错口诀: 动词形,名词数; 注意形和副; 非谓动词细辨别; 习惯用法要记住; 句子成分多分析; 逻辑错误须关注。 一. 动词形:主要包括两类错误:动词的时态和语态错误,以及主、谓不一致的错误。例如: My favorite sport are football. (is);Now my picture and prize is hanging in the library. (are) 上述两例分别属于时态错误和主、谓不一致错误。找出此类错误的关键是树立牢固的时态概念,注意短文内容发生或存在的时间,保持时间概念的一致性。10.11.→ spend 前后时态须一致。可知此处用一般现在时态,故把spent→ spend。 二. 名词数:指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。常表现为将名词复数写成单数。 例如:…so that I’ll get good marks in all my subject. (subjects) 9.12.→advice advice是不可数名词。故把advices→advice。 三. 区分形和副:即区分形容词和副词在句子中的作用和具体用法。这也是高考短文改错的常考点。 例如 I’m sure we’ll have a wonderfully time together. (wonderful);Unfortunate, there are too many people in my family. (Unfortunately)需要注意的是,形容词多用来做定、表、补语等,而副词只能在句子中作状语,修饰动词、形容词、副词或整个句子。第一例中的wonderful作定语修饰time,第二句的Unfortunately作状语修饰整个句子。7.13.→ happy 形容词作宾语补足语。故把happily→ happy。 考点:考查短文改错
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Always give 3.________ (strange) the feeling that you are at home. Have the snow 4.______(clean) off your stairs or out of your driveway during the winter season. You might ask someone to park 5.______ car in your driveway.

Tell your newspaper deliverer that you are not at home. 6.________(have) a pile of newspapers and other mail on your doorsteps tells people that are not at home, so you could also have a neighbor 7._______ a relative get your mail every day.

Fix a timer in some of your rooms 8.________ turns lights on and 9. ______ during different time of the day. Some TVs also comes with a timer that you could set to be turned on during certain time. Have a sensitive light outside your house that 10._______ (keep) thieves away when you are not at home.

 

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阅读下面短文,掌握其大意,从每题所给的 A、B、C、D 四个选项中,选出最佳选项,并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。

A couple of weeks ago, my friend offered to sell some of our things for us. I thought it was a good opportunity to ________ my 7-year-old son’s room and ________ some toys that were no longer suitable for him to play with. We ________ that all the money we got from selling the toys would be his money.

The night before the ________, we loaded up the truck with toys and a little bike that was too ________ for him. In the yard he ________ the bike for the last time and then happily put it onto the truck. This little bike had at least two previous owners as far as we ________. It wasn’t in the best ________ and was certainly not new, but the tires were ________ good.

We put a price of $10 on it, but it didn’t sell. So, after the sale was ________, my friend put it on the sidewalk with a sign that ________ “FREE BIKE”. Within five minutes her doorbell rang. A little boy was ________ there. In poor English he asked whether the bike was ________ free. She said yes and that he could have it for ________. He smiled, got on the bike and rode away.

Later that evening when I told my son how much money he had made at the sale, he was very ________, shouting happily. He asked about a few of his things, wondering ________ they had been sold. When he asked about the bike, I told him about the little boy and that made him ________. He was much happier than when I told how much he had ________. He was so happy to ________ that someone else would make good ________ of that little bike.

1.A. cleanB. checkC. displayD. design

2.A. look forB. go throughC. show offD. deal with

3.A. refusedB. agreedC. wroteD. lied

4.A. tripB. showC. saleD. decision

5.A. weakB. smallC. newD. thin

6.A. rodeB. foundC. watchedD. felt

7.A. doubtedB. knewC. toldD. thought

8.A. timeB. chanceC. placeD. shape

9.A. alsoB. neverC. stillD. hardly

10.A. aheadB. onC. nearD. over

11.A. saidB. repeatedC. copiedD. expressed

12.A. jumpingB. standingC. walkingD. shouting

13.A. barelyB. usuallyC. reallyD. always

14.A. somethingB. anythingC. everythingD. nothing

15.A. calmB. scaredC. excitedD. disappointed

16.A. whenB. ifC. whyD. where

17.A. smileB. worryC. leaveD. cry

18.A. enjoyedB. lostC. boughtD. made

19.A. hearB. understandC. rememberD. think

20.A. interestB. moneyC. useD. price

 

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A. Do not buy it.
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F. When buying fish, you should first smell it.
G. The fats in fish are thought to help prevent heart disease.

 

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I was born in Thailand, where I feel at home. I am used to jumping on to a song taow (red taxi), and squeezing (挤过) in between two strangers. I am used to bargaining at the market to get a shirt that I like. I love telling bilingual (双语的) jokes and I am used to the surprised looks I get from the Thais when I can speak their language fluently.

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C. normal                                 D. different

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C. she can’t find what she needs

D. she is like a fish out of water

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A. reasons                         B. problems

C. advantages                     D. suggestions

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A. her different lifestyles

B. a kind of culture shock

C. a feeling of loneliness

D. her ability to face difficulties

 

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What if our babies could somehow tell us what they’re thinking about, what they want, and what makes them unhappy? Robyn Holt, researcher for Baby Talk New Zealand, says they can. Holt heard about baby sign language through an advertisement and decided to go along to a workshop (研讨会).

“Sign language is something that’s always interested me, and I thought, it could be really cool to try this with a baby because we are always guessing all the time what they actually want.”

Holt started using baby sign language with her baby son Benjamin, now 12, and within two weeks he started to sign the sign for milk. She has since used it with her two younger sons Dominic, 8, and Matthew, 3.

Baby sign language is nothing new: the practice (which is based on adult sign language) has been out in America for more than 30 years. But it is enjoying a rebirth in New Zealand.

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A. To entertain her own children.

B. To better understand babies’ needs.

C. To help babies with language problems.

D. To develop a new system of sign language.

2.According to the text, baby sign language _____.

A. has been used in New Zealand for 30 years

B. can easily make the parents understood

C. has developed from adult sign language

D. was designed by Robyn Holt

3.What does the underlined part “the mystery” in Paragraph 5 refer to?

A. The ability to communicate.

B. Mothers’ intuitions.

C. The cause of the baby’s crying.

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4.Holt mentioned a parent and her child to show baby sign language is _____.

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