Question

每年都有许多人出国旅游，一些人的不文明行为引起了社会的广泛关注。某英语报社正在举行以“文明出国旅游”为主题的讨论。假定你是李华，请你给报社专栏编辑写一封信，呼吁大家做文明游客。要点如下：

1. 尊重习俗；  2. 不高声喧哗；  3. 其它。

注意 1. 词数100左右；  2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语已为你写好。

Dear Editor,

I’ve read your discussion on how to behave properly when traveling abroad.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Editor,

I’ve read your discussion on how to behave properly when traveling abroad. Every year, a great many holidaymakers go abroad for sightseeing and relaxation. While they are enjoying themselves, some of them behave rudely, which causes a big problem. How to be a civilized tourist has become a heated topic. In my opinion, it is necessary to watch our manners. First, we must respect and follow local customs. Besides, we’d better not talk loudly in public places to avoid disturbance to others, Also, be aware that queue jumping is unacceptable in many countries. More importantly, we should bear in mind that we are representing our country while abroad, so we need to be cautious about how we act. Only in this way can we enjoy our trip abroad and have beautiful memories as well.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：要求写说明文，注意条理要清晰，逻辑顺序和结构要恰当，同时要尽量保持简洁精干的内容，不拖泥带水。要注意题中所给的信息，不可偏题也不要遗漏，注意格式。尽量保持卷面整洁，字体美观，注意行文的连贯性。

【亮点分析】

题目所给第一句不看。 文章第二句是一个which引导的非限制性定语从句While they are enjoying themselves, some of them behave rudely, which causes a big problem.当他们在享受出国的乐趣时，他们中的一些人的行为会很粗鲁，这就产生了大问题。第三句是一个how引导的主语从句：How to be a civilized tourist has become a heated topic. 怎样成为一个有素质的游客已经成为一个热门话题。第七句是一个同位语从句Also, be aware that queue jumping is unacceptable in many countries.同样的，注意到插队在很多国家是不被接受的。 第八句是一个宾语从句More importantly, we should bear in mind that we are representing our country while abroad, so we need to be cautious about how we act. 更重要的，我们应该将在出国的时候我们代表我们的国家，所以对于我们的行为要更加小心记在心里。最后一句是一个倒装句Only in this way can we enjoy our trip abroad and have beautiful memories as well.只有在这种方式我们才能享受我们的出国的旅行，也留下美好的回忆。好的结构的短语 in my opinion在我看来； it is+adj.+to do sth做某事很…；在陈述观点的时候用了first…besides…also……More importantly来进行说明，层次递进，很有层次感。

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