Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

  增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下写出该加的词。

  删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

  修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

  注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

         2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Editor,

  I'm writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident．Several days ago, my neighbor ate a bag of food buying from the market．After the meal, they had stomachaches and their faces turn pale．Fortunate, one of their friends found the accident and immediately called an ambulance, which carried them quickly to a hospital．After several hours' treatment they finally escaped with death．

    As some illegal businessmen only interested in making profits to become rich quickly, we seldom care about the necessary safety measures．Nor do they care about which happens to consumers．They shall be charged by law．Meanwhile, I do hope whole society can realize the important of food safety and begin taking action together to make sure food is safe．

                                                                                                                                          Li Hua

Answer

1.第二句：neighbor改成neighbors

2.第二句：buying改成bought

3.第三句：turn改成turned

4.第四句：Fortunate改成Fortunately

5.第五句：去掉with

6.第六句：only 前加are

7.第六句：we改成they

8.第七句：which改成what

9.第九句：whole前加the / our

10.第九句：important改成importance

【解析】

试题分析：

1.After the meal, they had stomachaches and their faces turn pale可知邻居有很多，故用neighbor的复数形式neighbors。

2.

3.After the meal, they had stomachaches 可知为过去时态，故将turn改成turned。

4.

5.Escape：及物动词，逃脱。Escape death：逃脱死亡。所以应去掉with。

6. 考查固定结构。Be interested in sth.：对....感兴趣。 As some illegal businessmen are only interested in making profits：因为一些违法商人只对赚钱感兴趣。原句缺少be动词。所以要在only 前加are。

7. seldom care about the necessary safety measures 的主语应该为“那些商人”。故将we改成they。

8. happens to consumers是what引导的名词性从句，在原句中充当宾语。Nor do they care about which happens to consumers。他们也不关心顾客将会发生什么事情。What在宾语从句中充当主语，Which不能在从句中充当主语，故将which改成what。

9.society中社会society只有一个，应用the表示特指。或者我们整个社会：our whole society。故在whole前加the / our。

10. 考查词性。realize the importance of food safety 意识到食品安全的重要性。Important：adj. 重要的 importance：n. 重要性。故将important改成importance。