Question

假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。

修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.

I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do

homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.

Answer

 holding--hold

 passes---passed

 much----well/clearly

 shoulder---shoulders

 toward---to

 himself---him

 he前加and

 去掉a

 during---when

 never---ever

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了我对爷爷、奶奶的回忆。

 holding—hold  此处used to意为：过去常常的意思，后加不定式

 passes---passed根据前文的was可知，用一般过去时passed

 much----well/clearly根据文意可知，我清楚地记得爷爷。故用well或clearly

 shoulder---shoulders考查名词的单复数，此处指人的肩膀，故用复数形式

 toward---to考查动词短语，turn  to所以将toward改为to

 himself---him考查代词的用法。这里指：使他和其他人分开

 he前加and考查并列连词的用法。两个分句用并列连词连接

 去掉a考查固定短语的用法。此处事实上是in fact，故去掉a

 during---when考查状语从句的连接词。根据句意为，当他们过来和我玩或做作业的时候，故用when

 never---ever考查语意错误。根据句意：他是我认识的最和蔼的人。可知用ever曾经。

考点：考查学生的对基本语法及句法知识的纠错能力。