Question

假如你是Mike，今年12岁，在上小学。你生活在美国，性格外向，喜欢讲笑话。在某些方面你很优秀，如擅长打排球、与人们相处很融洽。你也很喜欢交朋友，想通过网络在中国找一个与自己有共同之处的笔友。

提示词：tell jokes，be good at/with, the same as, enjoy doing, Would you like to......

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Answer

Hello, everyone! My name is Mike. I am a primary school student from the USA. I am an outgoing boy. I am 12 years old. I am a funny boy, too. I like making friends and telling jokes. I am good at playing volleyball and playing basketball. I often play volleyball with my classmates after school. I am good with people. I want to find a pen friend in China. I think we have something in common. Would you like to be my pen friend?

【解析】这是一篇材料作文，介绍自己的个人情况，想交一个笔友。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：My name is……；I am……；I like……；I want……，I think……，Would you like to……？等句式的应用。写作中注意仔细观察图画，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的姓名，年龄以及职业，接下来介绍我的爱好，最后表达想要交一个笔友。此处like doing sth, tell jokes, be good at, be good with, want to do sth, have something in common等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。