Question

在我们周围经常存在安全隐患，所以我们应该对安全问题引起足够的重视。请以“Safety comes first” 为题写一篇短文，谈谈如何注意安全，原理危险。内容包括：

At home	be careful with, turn off the power and gas, not let strangers in
On the road	obey the traffic rules, not ride side by side, not listen to music
At school	not push others on the stairs, if… Accident, call 120
Your ideas	…(看法自拟，至少两点)

注意：

1、词数：100词左右（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；

2、文中不能出现真实校名、姓名等信息；

3、文章必须包括表格所提供的信息，并适当发挥，注意行文连贯，书写规范。

Safety comes first

Safety is very important to us students. Accidents often happen around us, so we must pay much attention to safety. At home, we should                                          

If we can do all these well, we’ll enjoy our life better.

Answer

Safety comes first

Safety is very important to us students. Accidents often happen around us, so we must pay much attention to safety. At home, we should be careful with fire and electricity.Remember to turn off the power supply and gas holders before leaving home.It will be very dangerous if you leave the gas on!On the road,we should obey the traffic rules.We mustn’t listen to music but pay full attention to the condition of roads.Besides,we’d better not ride side by side.

At school,we shouldn’t push others on the stairs when going up and down.If,unfortunately,there is an accident,call 120 as soon as possible.Thus,it is necessary for us to do some basic medical training for unexpected needs.In short,safety must come first!

If we can do all these well, we’ll enjoy our life better.

【解析】这篇作文要求我们以Safety comes first为题，写一篇文章介绍在生活中如何注意安全，远离危险。题目中给出了具体的写作提纲，主要有四个部分：在家、在学校、在路上如何注意危险，以及你对安全的看法。前三个部分中给出了一些关键词和短语，我们可以根据这些提示，组织语言和材料，串联成文。最后一部分需要自己充实内容，这就需要学生们自己发挥想象力，注意要与文章的主题密切相关。通过分析可知，这篇短文应使用一般现在时态，第一人称We来叙述，注意使用正确的语法结构、句型和短语，不要逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。在文章中使用一些连词，使上下文意思连贯、流畅。

点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文，短文根据题目要求谈论了自己对安全问题的看法，并对日常生活中我们的行为提出了一些建议。首先这篇短文内容完整，结构清晰。短文分成四个层次，At home, On the road, At school以及自己的看法，将所给的关键词串联了起来，成为一篇完整的短文。其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范、准确，正确使用了动词、介词和连词，符合英语的表达习惯。最后短文中有一些较好的句型，如Remember to turn off the power supply and gas holders before leaving home. It will be very dangerous if you leave the gas on!、We mustn’t listen to music but pay full attention to the condition of roads.、If, unfortunately, there is an accident, call 120 as soon as possible.、Thus, it is necessary for us to do some basic medical training for unexpected needs.等。