Question

请根据提示，给你的朋友海伦写一封邮件，告诉他有关你的学校生活及现在具备哪些能力。

1. 每天早起早睡，按时上学，完成家庭作业。

2. 每天走着去上学，不仅能锻炼身体，还有利于环保。

3. 每天放学后，我经常和朋友一起打篮球。周末，我还去俱乐部练钢琴。

Answer

Dear Helen，

How is it going? I tell you something about my school life.

Every day I get up early and go to bed early ,too. I go to school on time.I never go to school late. I also do my homework every night.

I often go to school on foot. I think it is good for both my health and environment. After school, I often play basketball with my friends. On weekends I go to Piano Club because I like play the piano very much.

My school life is very interesting. What about yours? Can you tell me ?

Yours，

Jim

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，给我的朋友海伦写一封邮件，告诉他有关我的学校生活及现在具备哪些能力。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I tell you……，I think……，I often play basketball with……，because I like……，My school life is……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头我想要告诉他我的学校生活，接下来介绍我每天的作息时间，上学和活动，最后询问他的学校生活怎么样。此处tell sb about sth, do one’s homework, on foot, be good for, on weekends, play the piano, what about等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。