Question

近年来，中小学生的健康问题日益引起人们的关注。其中垃圾食品、电子游戏等是影响健康的重要因素，请以“Keep  Healthy”为题谈谈你的看法。

要求：1．列举中小学生面临的健康问题。2．谈谈如何才能保持健康。

3．词数不少于70，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

4．内容可适当发挥，要求语法运用正确、逻辑通顺、语言表达流畅。

提示词：junk food, be bad for, computer games, suggestions, stay away from

Keep Healthy

Today some students have more and more health problems.

Answer

Keep Healthy

Today some students have more and more health problems. Today, I want to tell you how to keep healthy. It is very important for us. How to keep healthy ? First, we must have a healthy diet. Most of the students like eating junk food such as fried chicken, French fries and so on. But this kind of food is bad for us. It is unhealthy food. We should eat less fried food. Second, we must have a good habit. We should get up early and go to bed early. We exercise regularly in the morning. We should stay away from computer games. Finally, We must do some housework at home. My parents are very tired, so we can help them. By following these suggestions, you will be healthy.

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，以“Keep Healthy”为题谈谈我对垃圾食品、电子游戏等是影响健康的重要因素的看法。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I want to……，we must……，It is……，We should……，My parents are……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了中小学生面临的健康问题，接下来谈谈如何才能保持健康，最后总结遵循这些建议，你将会健康。此处want to do sth, keep healthy, such as, and so on, be bad for, get up, stay away from等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。