Question

请根据下面所给的提示内容，写一篇60词左右的人物简介。

贝多芬	德国伟大的作曲家	1770-1827
自幼爱好音乐，钢琴弹得很好，28岁得了耳病，18年后完全聋了。在此期间他仍继续工作，他的大部分作品都出自这个时间。《第九交响曲》是他一生中最著名的作品之一。

参考词汇：

贝多芬Beethoven

德国的German

作曲家composer

聋的deaf

继续工作go on working

作品works

《第九交响曲》The Ninth Symphony

Answer

Beethoven was a great German composer. He was born in 1770 and died in 1827.

When he was young, he liked music and played the piano very well. At the age of 28, there was something wrong with his ears, and 18 years later, he was deaf. During the time, he still went on working. He wrote most of his works. The Ninth Symphony was one of his most famous works in his life.

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍贝多芬。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般过去时，人称为单数第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：He was……，When he was ……,there was something wrong with……，he still went on……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了贝多芬是德国伟大的作曲家，接下来介绍他生平经历，最后指出《第九交响曲》是他一生中最著名的作品之一。此处play the piano, at the age of, go on doing sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。