Question

随着中国的发展，世界各地掀起了“汉语热”。作为中国人，我们更应该学好汉语。请以“My Chinese Learning”为题，写一篇短文。

内容包括：1.为什么要学好汉语？

2.谈谈自己学习汉语的经历。

3.介绍1—2条学习汉语的方法。

写作要求 词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Answer

My Chinese Learning

With the development of China，Chinese is becoming more and more popular.As native speakers，it’s our duty to learn Chinese well. It helps us to understand Chinese culture better.

Chinese was one of the subjects when I was in a primary school. At first，I used to be weak in it，and I felt stressed out. My Chinese teacher advised me to read more books. From then on，reading played an important role in my life. I often went to the library which was near my home. I made much more progress in Chinese.

I think reading books is a useful way of learning Chinese well. Also，it’s necessary to practice writing as often.

【解析】这篇作文是材料作文，话题是关于学习汉语，题目中给我们列出了具体的写作提纲，首先要介绍为什么要学好汉语；第二是介绍一些自己学习汉语的经历；最后是介绍学习汉语的一些方法。我们的作文里应将这三个主要内容包括在内。通过分析可知，这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时态或一般过去时态，如在介绍自己学习汉语的经历的时候，可能需要用过去时态，注意动词的过去式形式。写作时，还需要注意英语的语法要求，注意英语的表达习惯，使用一些平时积累的句型和短语，在句子之间使用一些连词或副词，使上下文内容连贯，表达更加流畅。

点睛：这是一篇很优秀的作文，短文中作者结合自己学习汉语的经历，介绍了学习汉语的重要性以及一些学习方法。首先这篇作文内容完整，包括了题目要求的所有信息，并对这些信息进行加工，连成了一篇完整、内容充实的文章。其次短文里使用了正确的时态和语态，在第二段中介绍自己的学习经历时，使用了一般过去时态，注意了动词过去式形式的变化，语法非常准确。在短文里还使用了一些很好的短语和句型，如With the development of China，Chinese is becoming more and more popular、Chinese was one of the subjects when I was in a primary school、I often went to the library which was near my home. I made much more progress in Chinese、I think reading books is a useful way of learning Chinese well等。