Question

随着年龄的增长，不少青少年发现越来越难以与父母沟通和交流，各方面的分歧使两代人之间的关系日益紧张。请围绕该话题谈谈你的看法。（不少于80 词）

内容提示：1、分析这种现象产生的主要原因。

          2、提出解决该问题的具体建议。

Answer

"I don't like my parents. They always tell me I should do this, and should not do that. It sometimes makes me angry，" said Zhang Hua，a middle school student．Almost every teenager have the same question. Why?
One of the biggest things is when someone becomes a parent，he/she likes worrying things. They worry about everything about you，from the time you were born. All these things are part of your life. They want you to grow up healthily and happily.
So how can you make things easier on yourself? Just make sure your parents know what you're doing. Get them to know your friends. Phone if you stay somewhere else so that your parents don't call every hospital in the phone book looking for your body. Say sorry to them when you make mistakes. Take responsibility(责任) for what you have done. Talk about your ideas with them.
Most of all，try to think about why your parents do this or do that.Someday，when you become a parent，they may be able to help you how to get on with your children.

【解析】代沟是一个很普遍的社会问题，家长和孩子们之间的交流和沟通越来越少，这样会导致很严重的社会问题。这篇作文就要求我们围绕这一现象谈谈自己的看法。题目中给出了我们写作的话题，具体分两个方面来叙述：一是这种现象产生的原因；另一个是解决这个问题的建议。题目中只给出了我们写作的方向，具体的内容需要我们自己发挥想象力来补充，去充实。这对于学生们来说是一个难点。另一个难点是英语表达和汉语的不同，很多句子会使用汉语说，但是换成英语就不会表达了。如何将自己的想法用符合英语表达习惯的句子表达出来，这是第二个难点。写作的时候，应注意使用英语中的一些常见句型和短语，把要表达的内容放在具体的短语和句型中。上下文之间使用一些连词和短语，以全文意思连贯。

点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先，短文内容完整、充实，作者根据题目要求阐述了这一社会问题产生的原因，并给出了自己的建议，符合题目的要求。其次短文语法准确，表达清楚、流畅，时态、人称都正确，并且每个句子都符合英语的表达规范。最后短文里使用了一些较好的句型，这些句型使整篇文章结构严谨，意思连贯。例如They always tell me I should do this, and should not do that、One of the biggest things is when someone becomes a parent，he/she likes worrying things、They want you to grow up healthily and happily.、Phone if you stay somewhere else so that your parents don't call every hospital in the phone book looking for your body、Most of all，try to think about why your parents do this or do that等。