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2016年4月14号，世界著名的篮球明星科比宣布退役，作为人们心目中的篮球偶像，科比影响了一代又一代人。最近你校举行以＂The person who has influenced me most＂为题的中学生英语征文活动，Kobe Bryant深深地影响着你，请根据表格中的内容要点完成征文。

	基本情况	1. 出生于1978年8月； 2. 从小对篮球感兴趣，1996年成为NBA球员； 3. 不仅在美国出名而且在全世界受欢迎。
成功的原因	1. 从未放弃自己的梦想； 2. ……
对我的影响	……

注意：

1. 短文应包括所有的内容要点。可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；

2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3. 词数80左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。

The person who has influenced me most

On 14th April， 2016， Kobe Bryant announced his retirement. He is the person who has influenced me most.

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The person who has influenced me most

On 14th April， 2016， Kobe Bryant announced his retirement. He is the person who has influenced me most.

He was born in August， 1978. When he was very young he became interested in basketball. He became a member of NBA in 1996. He is well-known not only in America but also all over the world. Usually he practices basketball harder than others even if he plays better. He never gives up hope and his dream. Through hard work， he made many achievements. Kobe Bryant is the person who I admire. His success proved that ＂Where there is a will， there is a way.＂

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。从提示可知，这是一篇人物介绍，人称为第三人称，时态以一般现在时态，一般过去时态为主，注意主谓一致，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。

写作亮点：这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。谚语的使用His success proved that ＂Where there is a will， there is a way.＂为文章增色不少。

考点：提纲类作文。