Question

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假设你叫李娜，在网上看到了以上三个网友的留言，你有办法帮助其中一个求助的人。 请你写一封电子邮件回复他(她)，内容包括：

1. 你对这个网友所提及的事情的看法。

2. 就该现象提出至少三条解决问题的建议。

3. 对该网友提出你的希望。

作文要求：

1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。

2. 语句连贯，词数80个左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear __________,

I'm very glad that I can give you a hand. ________________________________________

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Yours,

Li Na

Answer

Dear Jim，

I'm very glad that I can give you a hand.

You say you are too shy to make more friends in your new class. Please don't worry about it. Just try these ways.

Always remember to be kind to your new classmates, which can show that you are easy to get along with. You can also find someone who looks easygoing and talk with him. I have tried that and it worked. If you want to have more friends, why not join some clubs in order to meet more people who have the same interest as you do? Then you can be friends easily.

I really hope my suggestions can be useful for you. (105 words)

Yours,

Li Na

参考范文2：

Dear Cathy,

I'm very glad that I can give you a hand.

Please don't worry. Your trouble is very common these days. You can try these ways.

Your parents think you play computer games too much. The fact is that sometimes you are looking through something useful on computer. Why not talk with your parents and tell them the truth? Always remember your parents love you, and don't complain about it. You can also tell them you won't use it for too long and try to find other ways to solve your problems of learning. Listening to music on computer with your parents can also help a lot.

I really hope my suggestions can be useful for you. (107 words)

Yours,

Li Na

参考范文3：

Dear Li Ping,

I'm very glad that I can give you a hand.

Please don't worry about it any more. Here is some advice that can help.

First, you can learn English by listening to English songs, and it can help you remember more words and enjoy learning it. Second, why not ask the teacher for help? Teachers are always helpful. Third, it's useful to take notes and go over them more often. Fourth, studying with a group is a good way to learn English, because you can get help from your partners.

I really hope my suggestions can be useful for you. (91 words)

Yours,

Li Na

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文根据上一篇李明求助信息来写，李明在学英语上有困难，致使上周五的英语考试不及格，急需帮助。作文中就李明的具体困难提出了四条建议，条理清楚，而且也很实用，如果李明能够认真采纳的话，会有帮助的，是一篇不错的作文。

写作亮点：作文符合要求，层次清楚，实用性强，具有很好的参考价值。文中就如何学好英语，分条目的列出。开头引出建议内容，结尾希望对李明有所帮助。在语言表达上准确无误，符合邮件的格式。

考点：提纲作文。