Question

书面表达，根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。

许多同学在进入初三生活中会有许多烦恼，烦恼会使人产生压力，为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题，根据以下的信息点，以“Less Pressure, Better Life”为题，联系实际，适当发挥，写一篇80词左右的英语短文。

1. 同学们中普遍存在的压力(pressure)是什么；

2. 你的压力是什么；

3. 你是如何成功缓解压力的。

注意：文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。

Less Pressure, Better Life

Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world._______________________________________

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I hope everybody will have less pressure and a better life.

Answer

Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams. I’m always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. They want me to get good grades and go to a good high school. So they send me to all kinds of training classes on weekends.

Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think having a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.

I hope everybody will have less pressure and a better life.

【解析】

试题分析：本题要求以Less pressure, better life（压力越少，生活越好）为题写一篇短文，帮助同学们发现并解决生活中的心理压力问题。根据提示要求，短文要从：说明同学中普遍存在的压力、自己的压力及自己缓解压力的经验几个方面展开写作。短文要注意选择词汇、句型及语法结构，增强短文的条理性、连贯性。明确主题，突出中心。

写作亮点：本文第一段介绍了学生中所存在的一些压力问题，用some, others, Ｉ等等分层次，分类说明；第二段举了一个具体的例子，说明如何正确解决成长中所遇到的烦恼和压力；第二段提出了简单的希望，突出主题。本文很好地完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点；应用了较丰富的语法结构和词汇；用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚。完全达到了预期的写作目的。

考点：考查提纲作文。