Question

书面表达

近几年我们的家乡发生了很大的变化，以‘ changes to my hometown”为题，写一篇100字左右的文章，必须包括以下要点：

过去	1.狭窄的马路，低矮的房子 2.步行上学，骑自行车上班 3.人们常常聚集在一起打牌，下棋 4.写信或打电话与远方的朋友交流 5.鸟语花香，空气新鲜，绿树宽饶，景色优美
现在	1.宽阔干净的马路，房子宽阔明亮 2.骑自行车或摩托车(motorbike)去上班，有的甚至有自已的小汽车 3.人们可以看电视，上网，参加各种各样的聚会 4.通过因特网，微信(WeChat)互相聊天，使得交流更容易 5.有了一些空气污染，但是政府已经意识到了这个问题，采取了积极的措施
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要求：1. 字数100左右；

2. 短文必须包括所有内容要点，并适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺；

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Answer

Changes in My Hometown

In the past, my hometown was very small. People lived a poor life. The houses were old and small. Pollution was very serious, and there was rubbish everywhere. The transportation was not convenient, so few visitors came here.

Great changes have taken place in my hometown. The environment has become much better. The mountains have turned greener. The rivers are clearer and the sky is bluer. There are trees, flowers and grass everywhere. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars.

Every year, thousands of people from all over the world come to visit our city. I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。写出顺序的词来表达文意更清楚。完成提示词时也要符合事实。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇短文进行了较为全面的说明，从对家乡的过去开始描述，然后转入对家乡现在的情况介绍，通过对以往的面貌与现在面貌进行对比，体现出如今人们生活的幸福与快乐。同时使用了一些固定句式和短语，如：take place发生；turn greener变得更绿；large and bright大而明亮等等为文章增色不少。使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点：提纲作文。