Question

书面表达（20分）

某报社正在就“The person who has influenced me most”为题进行征文比赛。假设你的叔叔对你的学习生活影响非常大，你非常钦佩你的叔叔。请你根据表格提供的有关叔叔的信息和要求写一篇文章向该报社投稿。.

职业	作家	年龄	三十几岁
品质	有条理	从不忘记他需要做的事
勤奋	熬夜，做额外的工作
乐于助人	乐于帮助任何人。把我们的电视给买不起的人家；关心孤；,他一有多余的钱，就给需要中的人；献血好多次 ，他已捐的血够救70多人的生命。
最爱的颜色	红色	象征... (请自己发挥)
我的感觉	以前我并不觉得他很了不起，但现在我意识到....

注意：1. 开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；

2. 词数不少于100 字，可以根据要求作适当发挥。

The person who has influenced me most

I would like to talk about my Uncle Tom who has influenced me most.

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The person who has influenced me most

I would like to talk about my Uncle Tom who has influenced me most.

My uncle is in his thirties. He is a writer. You will not find anything unusual about him until you learn more.

He has never forgotten anything that he needs to do. He is very hard-working. He often stays up late to do extra work.

My uncle has always been kind and helpful. He is ready to help anyone. He gave our TV to a family who could not afford one. He cares for the children who have lost their parents. Whenever he has some money left, he gives it to someone in need.

My uncle donated blood many times. The blood he has donated is enough to save over 70 lives. To my surprise, he has decided to donate his body to medical research after his death.

My uncle ’s favorite color is red. He thinks red is the color of happiness. It is a symbol of happiness, good fortune, enthusiasm and prosperity.

I didn't think he was great, but now I realized that he has a heart full of love.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要以第三人称单数，用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：该文内容合理，结构连贯，段落清晰，要点齐全。多次使用固定短语如be ready to do sth（准备做某事），to one’s surprise（使某人惊奇的是）以及复合句如The blood he has donated is enough to save over 70 lives（他已捐的血够救70多人的生命）； I didn't think he was great, but now I realized that he has a heart full of love（以前我并不觉得他很了不起，但现在我意识到他有一颗充满爱的心）等等为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：提纲作文。