Question

假如你是李华，你的笔友Mike 从媒体上得知前段时间全国多地包括宁波等地出现雾霾，非常担心，写E-mail询问有关情况，请你回复。回复应包括以下要点：

实况描述       2.影响和成因           3.生活启示

注意：1.词数：100-120词。 E-mail的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

2.生词：雾霾 haze
Dear Mike,

Thank you very much for your concern.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Mike,

Thank you very much for your concern. Recently many places in China including Ningbo were blanketed with thick yellow haze. Everything around disappeared from our sight. Some highways were closed. Traffic jams were commonly seen in the streets. Many people, especially children and seniors, even found it difficult to breathe. As a result, local hospitals were crowded with people who had problems with their noses and lungs. Part of the cause was the dry weather, but the severely damaged environment contributed a lot to this nightmare. 

To make a significant change, we really have to do more to protect our environment. To live a better life, we have to push on with the economy, but it would be meaningless if we had to achieve it at the cost of our breathing air.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封书信。

根据提示可知，本篇为书信，要求写一封回信，时态应为一般现在时。关键要点如下：①前段时间全国多地包括宁波等地出现雾霾；②实况描述；③影响和成因；④生活启示。

第二步：根据关键要点，确定关键词，如：haze（雾霾），Traffic jams（交通堵塞），damaged environment（受破坏的环境）等。

第三步：根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题以及句子结构完整。

第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使之自然流畅，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面。