Question

假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter上次来访后惊叹你们家乡的巨大变化，回去后写信询问你们是如何在实践中将“绿水青山就是金山银山”这一理念转化为生动的现实的。内容要点如下：1. 简要介绍之前存在的问题； 2. 具体整改措施； 3. 带来的好处。

注意：1. 词数不少于100；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：绿水青山就是金山银山 Lucid waters and lush mountains are invaluable assets.

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Answer

Dear Peter,

I’m glad to have received your letter asking about how we put the theory “Lucid waters and lush mountains are invaluable assets.” into practice. Here is something about it.

Several years ago, a couple of economic zones were built to attract investors. Unfortunately, all the efforts were in vain due to the poor natural environment. Only then did the government realize the importance of green hills and clear waters. Therefore, concrete measures were taken to beautify the environment such as preventing pollution, planting trees and so on, which contributed to a new natural environment with birds singing in the forest and fish swimming in clear water. Owing to the attractive environment, more and more people come to visit and invest which in turn led to a boom of our economy.

I am sure you will like it. Looking forward to seeing you again in my hometown.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于提供类作文。根据提示要求给你的美国朋友Peter写一封关于询问你们是如何在实践中将“绿水青山就是金山银山”这一理念转化为生动的现实的信。内容要点如下：1. 简要介绍之前存在的问题； 2. 具体整改措施； 3. 带来的好处。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息。2、写作时根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态和语态。3、注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。4、词数不少于100，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

本文结构紧凑，要点全面，运用了一般现在时和将来时，多处使用高级词汇，如put the theory…into practice, in vain, due to, take measures to, contribute to, owing to, look forward to等，还运用句型Only then did the government realize the importance of green hills and clear waters.这句话运用了倒装句；Therefore, concrete measures were taken to beautify the environment such as preventing pollution, planting trees and so on, which contributed to a new natural environment with birds singing in the forest and fish swimming in clear water.和Owing to the attractive environment, more and more people come to visit and invest which in turn led to a boom of our economy.这两句话运用了定语从句等。并注意了句子的衔接如therefore，and等等。