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We all have a strong desire to succeed. For some the desire is great than that of the average people. In fact, everyone wants to successful but very few are willing to pay the price of hard working. Success is an attitude and has no really secrets. It all start with your belief system. Your belief system starts with what you feel about yourself. You must at the first believe in yourself. On your journey to succeed, you will find that there are no shortcuts. You will never be able to completely master every detail of your life. Attempt to do so will only lead to disappointment. Besides, it's necessary of you to have clear goals. You'd better put down your goals on paper where they are visible so that they can help to monitor your progress.

 

【解析】 文章作者主要讲述我们每个人都想要成功,但如何才能成功呢?作者给我们一些建议。 第一处:形容词形式用法错误。因为有than所以用形容词的比较级。句意:对一些人来说,欲望要大于普通人。故将great改为greater。 第二处:句法错误。形容词successful前缺少be动词。句意:事实上,每个人都想要成功。故在successful前加be。 第三处:词性用法错误。work既可作动词也可作名词。句意:但很少有人愿意付出辛勤劳动的代价。故将working改为work。 第四处:词性用法错误。修饰名词 secrets应该用形容词。句意:成功是一种态度,它没有什么真正的秘诀可言。故将really改为real。 第五处:主谓一致用法错误。主语为it,谓语动词应该使用第三人称单数形式。句意:一切都从你的信仰体系开始。故将start改为starts。 第六处:连接词用法错误。feel为连系动词,故用how。句意:你的信仰体系始于你对自己的感觉。故将what改为how。 第七处: 短语用法错误。短语at first起初。句意:你必须首先相信自己。故将the去掉。 第八处:词性用法错误。to为介词,故用名词作宾语。句意:在你成功的路上。故将succeed改为success。 第九处:非谓语动词用法错误。动名词短语作主语。句意:试图这样做只会导致失望。故将attempt改为attempting。 第十处:介词用法错误。在句式“It is(was)+adj+ for sb.+ to do sth”中,作表语的形容词大多是表事物性质的静态形容词;而在句式“It is(was)+adj.+of sb. to do sth.”中,作表语的形容词大多是表示人物特征的形容词。句意:你有明确的目标是必要的。故将of改为for。  
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2.I know nothing about _________(组织; 筹备) any bid event.

3.Employees who have worked here for many years will be given _________(prefer)over newcomers.

4.If he doesn’t want to go, nothing you can say will ________(说服) her.

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When Dunstan Cass left the cottage, Silas Marner was only a hundred meters away. He was walking home from the village, where he had _____to buy what he needed______his next day’s work. His legs were tired, but he felt almost happy. He was looking forward to_______,when he would bring out his gold. Tonight he had an extra reason to hurry home. He was going to eat hot meat, which was_______for him. And it would _____him nothing, because someone had given him a piece of meat as a present. He left it______ over the fire. The door key was needed to hold safe in place, but Cass was not at all_______about leaving his gold in the cottage with the door____. He could not imagine that a thief would____ his way through the mist, rain and darkness to the little cottage by the quarry ( 采石场 ).

When he reached his cottage and opened the door, he did not notice ______ anything was different. He  ____his wet coat, and pushed the meat_____the fire_______he was warm again, he began to think about his gold.. It seemed a long time to wait until after super, when he usually brought out coins to look at.______he decided to bring out his gold immediately, while the meat was still cooking.

But when he _____the floorboards near the room, and saw the _______hole, he did not understand _____. His heart beat violently as his trembling hands felt all round the hole. There was ______! He put his hands to his head and tried to think. Had he put his gold in a different place, and forgotten about it? He_____  every corner of this small cottage, until he could not pretend to himself any more. He had to accept the truth----his gold had been ____!

1.A. arrived    B. been    C. left    D. gone

2.A. to    B. in    C. for    D. with

3.A. holiday    B. gold    C. supper-time    D. meat

4.A. ordinary    B. unusual    C. normal    D. common

5.A. pay    B. spend    C. take    D. cost

6.A. boiling    B. cooking    C. smoking    D. making

7.A. interesting    B. worried    C. interested    D. worrying

8.A. unlocked    B. uncovered    C. discovered    D. locked

9.A. go    B. lead    C. find    D. lose

10.A. whether    B. that    C. because    D. as

11.A. turned off    B. threw into    C. threw off    D. got off

12.A. away from    B. farther on    C. on to    D. closer to

13.A. As soon as    B. As well as    C. No sooner    D. As long as

14.A. But    B. As    C. So    D. For

15.A. took down    B. took after    C. took over    D. took up

16.A. dark    B. empty    C. small    D. deep

17.A. at last    B. at once    C. at most    D. at least

18.A. everything    B. something    C. nothing    D. anything

19.A. searched    B. searched for    C. looked into    D. found

20.A. gone    B. missed    C. lost    D. stolen

 

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Scheduling Time with Yourself

Many of us are so busy with work, school and home life that often there is no time left over to do something that you enjoy. What follows are some ways to carve out that essential time you need to slow down, enjoy life and relax yourself.

1. . Try to save certain weeknights just for you. If others ask you to do things those nights, just tell them you have plans. Use the time for gardening, reading, exercise, thinking or the ultimate luxury of doing nothing!

Monthly Treat.  2. . It could be on your lunch break, a weekend or it could be leaving work early. Maybe you get a spa treatment, go to see a movie, a haircut, play golf or whatever treat you’re always thinking about but rarely get to. Schedule it in and it will happen!

Buy Tickets in Advance. Sports, theater, concerts or any other event you would enjoy. Schedule the plans with a friend later. 3..

4.. Huh? Yes, many of us stay at work late on a regular basis. If this is you, make it a point to leave work exactly on time at least once a week, if not more. And then enjoy that time! Leave work at work.

Join a Group. Here are some ideas of groups that can allow you some time away from work and home: singing group, gardening group, astronomy society, book club, biking clubs, ski club, etc. What are you interested in? Strike while the iron is hot.5.. If you can’t find a club, consider starting one yourself!

A. Schedule a treat for yourself once a month.

B. listen to your favorite music!

C. Look up a club in your area today and join!

D. Having the tickets already in hand will force you to make it happen!

E. Evenings with Yourself.

F. Take an Adult Education Class.

G. Leave Work on Time.

 

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When one loves one’ s Art no service seems too hard.

Joe was a man with a genius for art. Delia did things in six octaves(音阶) promisingly.

Joe and Delia became in love with one of the other, or each of the other, as you please, and in a short time were married–for (see above), when one loves one’ s Art no service seems too hard.

They began housekeeping in a flat. It was a lonesome flat, but they were happy; for they had their Art, and they had each other.

Joe was learning painting in the class of the great Magister–you know his fame. His fees are high; his lessons are light–his high–lights have brought him fame. Delia was studying under Rosenstock–you know his reputation as a disturber of the piano keys.

They were mighty happy as long as their money lasted.

After a while Art flagged. Everything going out and nothing coming in, money was lacking to pay Mr. Magister and Rosenstock their prices. When one loves one’s Art no service seems too hard. So, Delia said she must give music lessons to make the ends meet.

For two or three days she went out looking for pupils. One evening she came home overjoyed

“Joe, dear,” she said, cheerfully, “I’ ve a pupil. And, oh, the loveliest people! General– General Pinkney’ s daughter Clementina–on Seventy-first street.”

“That’s all right for you, Dele,”said Joe, “but how about me? Do you think I’m going to let you work while I play in the regions of high art?”

Delia came and hung about his neck.

“Joe, dear, you are silly. You must keep on at your studies. It is not as if I had quit my music and gone to work at something else. While I teach I learn. I am always with my music.”

“All right,” said Joe. “But I may sell some of my pictures as well.”

The next few weeks, they both busied themselves with their own business and brought back a ten, a five, a two and a one–all legal tender notes–and laid them beside each others’ earnings. One Saturday evening Joe reached home first. He spread his $18 on the table and washed what seemed to be a great deal of dark paint from his hands. Half an hour later Delia arrived, her right hand tied up in a shapeless bundle of wraps and bandages.

“How is this?” asked Joe. Delia laughed, but not very joyously. “Clementina,” she explained, “insisted upon a Welsh rabbit(一种奶酪) after her lesson. In serving the rabbit she spilled a great lot of it, boiling hot, over my wrist. Nothing serious, dear.”

“What time this afternoon did you burn your hand, Dele?”

“Five o’clock, I think,” said Dele. “The iron–I mean the rabbit came off the fire about that time.”

“Sit down here a moment, Dele,” said Joe. “What have you been doing for the last few weeks, Dele?” he asked.

She braved it for a moment or two with an eye full of love and stubbornness, but at last down went her head and out came the truth and tears.

“I couldn’t get any pupils,” she wept. “I got a place ironing shirts in that big Twenty-fourth street laundry. A girl in the laundry set down a hot iron on my hand this afternoon. I think I did very well to make up both General Pinkney and Clementina. What made you ever suspect that I wasn’ t giving music lessons?”

“I didn’t,” said Joe, “until tonight. And I wouldn’t have then, only I sent up this cotton waste and oil from the engine-room this afternoon for a girl upstairs who had her hand burned with a smoothing-iron. I’ve been firing the engine in that laundry for the last few weeks.”

“And then you didn’ t …” said Delia.And then they both looked at each other and laughed, and Joe began: “When one loves one’s Art no service seems …”

But Delia stopped him with her hand on his lips. “No,” she said– “just ‘When one loves’.”

1.What can we know about the couple from the story?

A. They both became famous for their talents in art.

B. Studying from famous teachers contributed most to their poverty.

C. Art helped them out of the poverty they were faced with.

D. They turned out to be working at the same laundry.

2.What qualities of the couple’s are best conveyed in the story?

A. considerate and giving.    B. faithful and romantic.

C. intelligent and economical.    D. hardworking and loyal.

3.What does the underlined word “flagged” most probably mean?

A. Became weaker.    B. Displayed its power.

C. Went in a wrong direction.    D. Returned to its original condition.

4.Which of the following does NOT give readers a clue that the couple were telling white lies?

A. Joe washed what seemed to be a great deal of dark paint from his hands.

B. Delia’s right wrist was tied up in a shapeless bundle of wraps and bandages.

C. Delia said she must give music lessons to make the ends meet.

D. “The iron–I mean the rabbit came off the fire about that time” said Dele.

5.What can serve as the best title of this story?

A. A Service of Art    B. The Love for Art

C. A Service of Love    D. No Art No Love

 

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“Tiger Mother” parenting raises media storm. A new book written by a self-described Chinese descent(血统)on her super-strict parenting—Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother has raised media storm and fierce debates in the U.S.

Amy Chua is a Yale Law School professor and the mother of two teenage girls. She is the daughter of immigrants of Chinese descent. In the Chinese culture,the tiger symbolizes strength and power. In her book Ms.Chua writes about how she demanded excellence from her daughters. For example,her daughters,Sophia and Louisa,were never allowed to attend a sleep-over,be in a school play,watch TV or play computer games. They couldn’t choose their own after-class activities or get any grade less than an A.They had to play piano or violin—and no other musical instruments. She writes that if a Chinese child gets a B—which she says” would never happen”—there would be a screaming,hairtearing explosion”.She describes making her 7-year-old daughter play a piano piece perfectly—yelling and not letting her leave the bench even to use the bathroom—until it was.

Many people have criticized Chua. Some say her parenting methods were abusive. She even admits that her husband,who is not Chinese,objects to her parenting style. But she says that was the way her parents raised her and her three sisters.

Stacy DeBroff,who has written four books about parenting,says Amy Chua’s parenting style is not limited to Chinese families. She says it represents a traditional way of parenting among immigrants seeking a better future for their children. But she also sees a risk. When children have no time to be social or to follow their own interests,they might not develop other skills that they need to succeed in life. Stacy DeBroff advised parents not to just repeat the way they were raised.

Alison Lo,an assistant professor of marketing at the University of Washington’s Bothell campus said,“I don’t think Amy is advocating a best practice of parenting style, or that success and achievements are critical yardsticks(衡量标准)of a good life. But I can imagine how strong her daughters’ college applications are going to be. For many parents whose dreams are seeing their kids graduating from a competitive university, Amy is sharing with the readers that it is achievable by persistent, dedicated parental guidance, ”Lo said in an interview with Julie Muhlstein, a columnist with the US-based Heraldnet.com.“In that sense, a young adult’s giftedness can be born, or made, ”Lo continued.

1.According to the passage,which is TRUE of Amy Chua?

A. She is an easy-going woman.    B. She is an assistant professor.

C. She is a demanding parent.    D. She is a cruel teacher.

2.Which of the following are Sophia and Louisa allowed to do?

A. Playing the piano.    B. Playing the guitar.

C. Dating with boys.    D. Getting an A minus.

3.Stacy DeBroff advised parents to________.

A. seek a better future for their children    B. develop their own style of parenting

C. be strict with their children    D. follow Amy Chua’s parenting style

4.Alison Lo concluded that________.

A. persistent,dedicated parental guidance is the best parenting style

B. parents should respect children’s personalities

C. a gifted child was born with talent

D. a teenager can be raised to be talent by strict parenting

 

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