Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

As the saying goes, chances favored the prepared mind. I learned this from one of my experience.

I was not chosen as member of the volleyball team of our school. Because of this, I decided to give up play volleyball. Luckily, my best friend stopped me but pointed out that it was my laziness and poor preparation which led to my failure. After that, I practiced playing volleyball on every day. When another tryout arrived, I was full prepared and tried my best. As a result, I was selected and became an important player on our school team.

From this, I am firmly convincing that, no matter when chances arrive, we were able to seize them as long as we get well prepared.

Answer

【解析】

这是一篇记叙文。俗语说，机会是给有准备的人准备的，作者从自己加入校队的经历体悟到了这个道理。

1. 考查谓语动词的时态。根据从句As the saying goes可知，本句说明的是一般的道理，所以谓语动词用一般现在时态，因此favored改为favor。

2. 考查名词单复数。句意：我从我的其中一个经历了解到了这个道理。本句的experience表示“经历”，是可数名词，根据one of 可知，用复数，故experience改为experiences。

3. 考查冠词。根据I was not chosen as member of the volleyball team可知，应该用a修饰可数名词。故as后加a member，表示“我没有能够成为校队的一个成员”。

4. 考查非谓语动词。give up用doing做宾语，故play改为playing。

5. 考查连词。my best friend stopped me表示“我最好的朋友阻止了我”，这和后句pointed out that it was my laziness and poor preparation which led to my failure之间是并列关系，所以用and连接两句。故but改为and。

6. 考查强调句式。本句是强调句，强调主语my laziness and poor preparation，根据强调句的句式结构it be…that…，故which改为that。

7. 考查介词。every day表示“每天”，它的前面不用介词，所以删去on。

8. 考查形容词和副词的区别。修饰动词prepared用副词fully。故full改为fully。

9. 考查派生词。convincing表示“令人信服的”；convinced表示“确信的”，本句表示“我相信我们能抓住这个机会”，故convincing改为convinced。

10. 考查动词时态。根据I am firmly得知，本句用一般现在时，故were改为are。