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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I was on the Sichuan Airlines passenger flight traveling from Chongqing to Lhasa. A plane was flying at a height of about 9,700 meters while an extremely loud sound was heard. The plane experienced a sudden lose of air pressure and drop in temperature. When I looked over, I saw a window was going and the passenger seated by that window had halfway out of the window. The passenger is wearing his seatbelt, because of that he was able to be pulled back inside the plane. Fortunately, he only suffered several minor injury. Difficult as it seemed to control the plane, but the pilot safely landed the plane in Chengdu. Neither of the plane’s 119 passengers were hurt.

 

第一处:A改为the 第二处:while改为when 第三处:lose改为loss 第四处:going改为gone 第五处:had后加been 第六处:is改为was 第七处:that改为which 第八处:injury改为injuries 第九处:删除but 第十处:Neither改为None 【解析】 本文是一篇记叙文,一架从成都飞往拉萨的航班在高空中突然失去气压,机舱里温度急剧下降,但飞行员冷静处理,让飞机在成都安全降落。 第一处:考查定冠词。不定冠词a/an表示泛指,定冠词the表示特指,the flight特指前面一句中提到的从重庆去拉萨的航班。句意:本次航班正在9700米的高度飞机在这时突然听见了一个极大的噪音。故把A改为The。 第二处:考查固定句式。句式be doing sth when….正在做某事在这时….(发生了意料之外的事情),句中的when是一个并列连词。句意:本次航班正在9700米的高度飞机在这时突然听见了一个极大的噪音。故要把while改为when。 第三处:考查名词。句意:这架飞机体验了突然失去气压和温度迅速降低。句中的形容词sudden要修饰名词,句中的lose是动词,所以要把lose改为loss。 第四处:考查形容词。句意:当我查看的时候,我看见一个窗户不见了。句中形容词gone不见了,和系动词was构成系表结构。故把going改为gone。 第五处:考查时态。当我看到的时候,飞机没有一扇窗户,坐在窗户旁边的乘客半个身子已经在外面了,使用过去完成时描述当时的情况。故要在had后面加been。 第六处:考查时态。句意:这位乘客带着安全带,正因为这样,他才能够被拉回飞机里。本文叙述了过去发生的一起事故,全文都使用一般过去时。所以要把is改为was。 第七处:考查定语从句。本句中which指代前面一句话的内容在句中做because of的宾语。句意:这位乘客带着安全带,正因为这样,他才能够被拉回飞机里。关系代词that不能做介词的宾语,所以要把that改为which。 第八处:考查名词单复数。本句中有形容词several,说明后面应该使用可数名词的复数形式。句意:幸运地是,他只受了几个小伤。故把injury改为injuries。 第九处:考查连词。句中含有“形容词+as+句子其他成分”句式,相当于Though….;句意:尽管控制飞机似乎很难,但是飞行员还是让飞机在成都安全降落了。连词though和but不能连用,所以把句中的but删除。 第十处:考查代词。代词neither指两者都不,none指三者或三者以上都不。飞机上有119名乘客,他们都没有受伤。所以使用代词none。  
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A. how driverless cars can help deal with transportation-related problems

B. how driverless cars can travel safely

C. how driverless cars can travel faster

D. how driverless cars can move more people

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