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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)画掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Though great progress has been made in science these years, but there are still many people lived in poor conditions. They make their living by collecting and selling used thing. Their children cannot go to school because they have not enough money to send their children to there. Why you think so many people still suffer from poverty now? The answer lies on the population explosion. A president of a developing country once say: “It is us who are to blame for the poverty because we used to ’produce’ children without limit.” Although this few words sound simple enough, they have clear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion.

 

第一句:去掉but;lived→living 第二句:thing→things 第三句:to there→there 第四句:在Why后加do 第五句:on→in 第六句:say→said;us→we 第七句:this→these;clear→clearly 【解析】 本文为议论文。虽然近年来科学取得了很大进步,但仍有许多人生活在贫困的中,原因在于人口过于爆炸。一位发展中国家的总统曾经说过:“贫困应该归咎于我们,因为我们曾经无限制‘生产’儿童。”尽管这几个词听起来很简单,但他们已经明确指出了人口爆炸的原因之一。 1.考查连词。分析句子可知,本句中表示“虽然近年来科学取得了很大进步,但仍有许多人生活在贫困的环境中”。从句中已有连词though,所以but是多余的,故去掉but。 2. 考查固定搭配。make one's living是一个固定搭配,意思是“谋生”。故lived改为living。 3. 考查名词单复数。此句的主语是一个复数,句意:他们靠着收集和买卖二手的东西过活。“收集”和“买卖”的东西不可能只是一件,所以things要变成复数形式,故thing 改为things。 4. 考查副词。There是一个地点副词,译为“那里,那儿”;副词前不能用不定式to,故去掉to, 即把to there改为there。 5. 考查特殊疑问句。句意:为什么你认为这么多人现在还在遭受贫困?此句是一个特殊疑问句,句型为:特殊疑问词+助动词+主语+其他,这个句子什么都不缺,唯独没有助动词,故why后面加do。 6. 考查介词搭配。句意:答案在于人口的膨胀。lie in为固定搭配,意为“在于”,故on 改为in。 7.考查谓语动词的时态。句意:一个发展中国家的总统曾经说过…。句子的once,意为:“曾经”,所以本句是曾经说过,即表示过去的动作,因此say改为said。 8.考查强调句。句意:我们应该为贫困而负责,因为我们曾经“无限制地生”孩子。本句为强调句型。陈述句的强调句型:It is/ was + 被强调部分(通常是主语、宾语或状语)+ that/ who(当强调主语且主语指人)+ 其他部分。根据分析,本句的强调句强调的是主语,us是宾格,不能做主语,故us 改为we。 9.考查名词复数。this修饰名词的单数形式或不可数名词。句中的要修饰的词是名词复数words,修饰复数形式要用these修饰,故this改为these。 10.考查副词作状语。句意:虽然这几句话听起来很简单,但他们已经清楚地指出了人口爆炸的一个根源。句中的形容词clear在句中修饰行为动词 point out,修饰动词应该用副词,故clear改为clearly。  
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16.A. legs    B. tool    C. shoes    D. wheelchair

17.A. point    B. apologize    C. shout    D. reply

18.A. agreed    B. escaped    C. left    D. stopped

19.A. suggested    B. doubted    C. explained    D. realized

20.A. experience    B. patience    C. optimism    D. curiosity

 

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