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请认真阅读下面文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。 Should p...

请认真阅读下面文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

Should parents leave all of their money to children and let them live a carefree life without even the necessity of earning money to support themselves? Here are two pieces of news about two celebrities:

Bill Gates: Bill Gates has promised to give all of his $ 58 billion fortune to charity he has set up with his wife, The Bill and Melinda Gates Foundation, which funds health and education projects around the world. He wanted to make a positive contribution to the world.

Zuckerberg: We will give 99% of our Facebook shares during our lives to advance human potential and promote equality. We know this is a small contribution compared to all the resources and talents of those already working on these issues. But we want to do what we can, working alongside many others.

Many world-famous wealthy businessmen choose to donate almost all of their possessions to the charity instead of leaving their fortune to their children. In their opinion, it is better to develop the quality of independence of their children, making them possess the competence of living by themselves.

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1. 以约30个词概括上述材料的主要内容。

2. 以约120个词谈谈你对以上材料的看法,内容包括:

你是否赞同这些名人的做法以及你的理由;

请你就父母如何培养孩子的独立性方面,谈谈你的看法(两到三点)。

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1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;

2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;

3. 不必写标题。

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内容完整, 语言规范,语篇连贯, 词数适当。

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Some celebrities choose to donate almost all their money to the charity so that they can educate their children to be independent and learn to support themselves. I am in complete agreement with those celebrities’ decision. A child without the competence to support himself will at length/ ultimately consume all the money left for him and live in poverty, let alone supporting his family. What’s more, the ever-changing world means you need to learn new things almost at any moment and anyone totally dependent on others will find it hard to survive. From my perspective, many measures can be taken by parents to improve their children’s independence. First and foremost, parents can teach children to do what they can at an early age, thus making them know they should get what they want through their own efforts. What’s more,they sometimes need to put children through trials to give them opportunities to learn to deal with difficult situations independently. Only by learning to tackle various difficult situations by themselves can they become mature individuals. 【解析】 本文是一篇读写任务型书面表达,难度极大。要求考生阅读材料并以约30个词概括材料的主要内容,并谈谈对培养孩子的独立性的看法。全文以一般现在时为主,使用第一人称和第三人称。 第1步:审题。根据提示可知本文读写任务型书面表达,要求考生阅读材料并以约30个词概括材料的主要内容,并谈谈对培养孩子的独立性的看法。全文以一般现在时为主,使用第一人称和第三人称。 第2步:组织要点。比尔盖茨等名人选择把个人财产捐给慈善组织,以此教育孩子要依靠自己。我们完全同意这一做法,孩子们要靠自己独立生活。父母要从小教育孩子做力所能及的事情,并给孩子适当的考验。 第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。 本篇范文结构完美,条理清晰。范文时态和人称运用准确,涵盖了文字提示要求的所有要点,且有适当的个人发挥。文章里使用了较多的高级词汇,如in complete agreement with、at length/ ultimately、From my perspective等;考生运用了多样式的句型结构,整篇文章富有变化,并不死板。尽量运用了丰富的句式,如部分倒装句Only by learning to tackle various difficult situations by themselves can they become mature individuals,同时文章里还使用了一些串联成分,让文章各要点更为紧密地结合在一起。这些高级语法结构的运用提升了文章的层次,显示了很强的驾驭语言的能力。  
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What do you do when somebody hurts you? Do you want to hurt that person back, or do you hold it against them for the rest of your life? If you answered “yes” to these questions, know that you are like most people. To forgive is something that most people generally have difficulty with.

People don’t forgive readily, because it is easier to hate than to forgive. Some people think to forgive is a sign of weakness, but actually to forgive takes courage and effort.

Forgiveness is a gift from a generous heart. It is not a reward for good behavior. It is not based on whether the person deserves it or whether the person has asked for it.

Besides, forgiveness is an act and a process, which often takes time. The deeper your pain, the longer it usually takes to completely forgive. It is an act because it is not just the words you say, but also your actions which show if you’ve truly forgiven someone.

Forgiveness is necessary because it helps removes the burden of bitterness and hate. It takes a lot of energy to hate and to keep that hate in place. Hate puts unnecessary stress on your body. It is a well-known fact, proven by numerous studies, that bitterness and hate can actually make you sick. The moment that people forgive and let go of their hate, they will start to get well. Forgiveness brings freedom, whereas revenge (报复) is neither sweet nor satisfying.

I have personal experience of this. I used to be very cynical about life and didn’t forgive easily. At the time, I also struggled in every area of my life. Things just didn’t seem to work out for me. It is as if everything that could go wrong, always went wrong. That was until somebody told me to take a look at my attitude. And when I forgave those who wronged me and changed my attitude, everything else changed. It didn’t happen overnight. It took a while, but I could see and feel the difference.

Are things not working out in your life, despite you doing all the “right” things? Is it possible that you are holding “unforgiveness” in your heart? It is worth thinking about.

Introduction

It is common that people find it difficult to forgive those 1.them.

Myth of forgiveness

To forgive is a sign of weakness.

Truth of forgiveness

To forgive is in fact a sign of 2.

To forgive shows you have a generous heart, not that someone has done something good that is 3. your forgiveness..

The time it takes to forgive someone is decided by the 4. of the pain.

It is your action rather than words that really 5..

Reasons for forgiveness

To hate requires much energy, thus 6. unnecessary stress on the body.

Forgiveness 7.  you from bitterness and burden.

Author’s experience

Everything seemed to go wrong until I was 8. of my own attitude towards things happening to me.

Everything changed in 9. to my changed attitude.

Conclusion

When you find everything going wrong 10. your effort, think about your attitude toward forgiveness.

 

 

 

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My dearest daughter, as I looked across at you sitting on the sofa watching The X Factor, I noticed that you are no longer a child, and that having just celebrated your 14th birthday, you are now a young woman starting a journey into becoming an adult woman. As I looked at you, I remembered myself at 14, and the vastly different places we are beginning this journey from.

Your identity as a mixed-race young woman, with an English father and a Pakistani mother, has already influenced how you place yourself in this world. As yet, you are unaware of the personal struggles that I took at the age of 25 to marry. How it felt when my mother refused to come to my wedding. The sharp criticisms of the Asian community that such marriages do not work out and always end in divorce. The confidence I had to grow, as we chose to live in a multicultural community, as I refused to be shamed into living in the leafier white suburbs.

Then, at the age of 30, I became your mum with all the joys and struggles this brought, as I refused the Asian traditions for a new baby's arrival. From your birth, your life could not have been more different from mine. I was brought up on a council estate, within a tight-knit extended Muslim family, through which poverty, racism and neglect were woven. I was never given the freedoms or the opportunity to experience new things. Now, as I hear you play your piano. I am grateful that you have these opportunities.

So many doors were closed to me as a young person, and as I fought for small steps of freedom, I soon learned that it was better to do what I wanted without the knowledge of my parents, and so deceit and deception(欺骗) became woven into my life too. The pressures to obey, to be a "good Muslim" girl and keep the family honour, were choking. Behind closed doors at home, the neglect and abuse took place. It was hidden, I felt the shame, lived with the fear and suffered alongside my sister and two younger brothers. Oh, the power we thought our parents had over us! I was convinced that one day my father would indeed beat us so hard that leaving us for dead, he would, as his threats said he would, bury us in the large back garden, and tell the school he had taken us back to Pakistan for good. My sister and I longed for a different blue sky to live under.

As a daughter of immigrant parents, I carried their hopes of a better education for their children--my own veins(血管) pulsing with the hard- work ethic(道德) and need to be grateful for the opportunity of a free education. And it was education that provided me with the strength to find my own blue sky. I fought to leave home to go to university at the age of 18, and never returned to live with my parents again.

Now as you explore your mixed-race heritage, which I hope we have supported you to do with visits to Pakistan and ensuring you go to multi-cultural schools, I want you to take the very best of all that is Asian with you as you become a woman.

I want you to know that although your journey has been vastly different. I am excited as I watch you standing on the threshold of becoming a woman for all the adventures and possibilities the future holds for you.

May you fly your blue sky with grace, confidence and hope as you find your place in this beautiful and crazy world.

Loving you now and always.                                          Mommy

1.Mommy's mother refused to attend her wedding party because _________.

A. she struggled to break away from the family before it

B. her marriage was against the tradition of the community

C. she would leave the family to settle in the white suburbs

D. she refused the Asian tradition for a new baby’s arrival

2.What can be inferred from mommy's Muslim family life?

A. She was forced to drop out of school.

B. She behaved like a good Muslim girl.

C. She fought against her Muslim identity.

D. She suffered much abuse in the family.

3.From the fourth paragraph, we can see that Mommy was very _________.

A. determined    B. realistic

C. ambitious    D. tolerant

4.Mommy sends her daughter to multicultural schools to _________.

A. prepare the daughter for different adventures in future

B. ensure the daughter more opportunities to visit Pakistan

C. increase the daughter’s exposure to different cultures

D. encourage the daughter to grow up to be a better woman

5.We can learn from the passage that Mommy _________.

A. is regretful for giving her daughter the mixed-race identity

B. encourages her daughter to explore her origin and pursue her dream

C. won’t forgive her parents for the sufferings she had during childhood

D. criticizes the social traditions and prejudice in her community

 

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University graduates Mallorie Brodie and Lauren Hasegawa, who invented a smartphone app that tracks construction defects(缺陷)for commercial builders, had a tiger by the tail.

Bridgit, which they founded in 2012, launched a cloud-based communications platform that helped manage defects on construction sites, which can delay projects and result in costly repairs if left unchecked. The smartphone application lets site supervisors take photos of cracks or damaged paint, share them with employees and track the problems to solution.

More than 600 subcontractors used the pilot version in many building sites before the commercial version, called Closeout, officially launched.

Feedback(反馈)was so good that they began to wonder: Why limit their invention to a specific industry? Why not turn it into some kind of a handy tool for consumers too? This became their dilemma. In other words, should they stay the course or look for wider applications of their app?

The experts polled all agreed Bridgit should stay focused on its original goal. Ms. Hasegawa and Ms. Brodie took that advice.

As more business customers signed on, it became clear that they made the right decision. Since then, the company’s growth has been rapid.

Earlier this year, Bridgit launched Closeout ,which is designed so that even the least tech-savvy can use it easily. Today, the app is being used on sites across Canada and the United States and even by top general contractors(承包商).

In October, Bridgit was named to the Canadian Innovation Exchange’s top 20 list of Canada’s most innovative companies working in digital media and information and communication technology .

But Ms. Hasegawa and Ms. Brodie are not resting on their glories. They have also been collecting feedback on Closeout from customers, and they’ll launch a new version in the spring. It will target not only general contractors but developers and building owners, too.

1.The two graduates invented the smartphone application to _______.

A. track construction sites and commercial builders

B. provide a communication platform to share photos

C. avoid project delay or costly repairs in construction

D. enable supervisors to take and share photos of buildings

2.The underlined word in Paragraph 7 most probably means _______?

A. keen on technology    B. weak in technology

C. addicted to technology    D. good at technology

3.According to the passage, what may contribute to the graduates’ success?

A. Investing in your strengths    B. Serving more customers

C. Innovating technology    D. Simplifying technology

4.The graduates’ future plan is to _______.

A. launch a new application in the spring

B. collect feedbacks from customers on Closeout

C. include different people in construction industry

D. target more consumers from various industries

 

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In mid-January, Cape Town officials announced that the world-class South African city of four million residents would run out of water on April 12. The date, nicknamed “Day Zero,” has since been postponed multiple times, thanks to the intense conservation efforts by locals, a sharp reduction in agricultural water usage, and a 10 billion-liter donation from the private reservoirs(水库) of the Groenland Farmers Association.

The city now has enough water to sustain the current level of usage until July 9, giving residents hope that the rainy season, which begins in June, will be more regular than has been the case lately.

Four years ago, Cape Town’s water disaster would have seemed impossible given that the city’s six dam, which can hold 230 billion liters of water, were filled to the brim. However, three years of low rainfall – a third of normal levels – and the ever-increasing population, have reduced the dams to puddles.

In an attempt to avoid Day Zero, the government has imposed a strict 50-liter daily limit for all households. Residents are being urged to reduce their water usage by making small changes like taking shorter showers and reusing bathing water to flush toilets. Those that use more have to pay heavy fines.

When Day Zero strikes, a million homes or about 75 percent of the city will lose access to running water. Residents will instead have to wait in line at the over 200 water distribution centers established around the city to obtain 25 liters a day.

Though conservation measures will help in the short run, only nature can solve the problem. If the city gets enough rainfall during its winter season from June to August, it will provide much-needed relief. However, the local officials are not sure it will happen.

1.What does the underlined word “brim” in the second paragraph probably mean?

A. bottom    B. top edge

C. extended part    D. central part

2.What effort is being made now to avoid Day Zero?

A. Limiting the daily usage of water to 25 liters.

B. Establishing 200 water distribution centers in the city.

C. Reducing the city population as much as possible

D. Restricting water usage in agriculture significantly

3.What does the last paragraph mainly want to convey?

A. Tomorrow is still unknown.    B. Current efforts will pay off.

C. Man is at the mercy of nature.    D. It’s time to make joint efforts.

4.What is the author’s purpose in writing this passage?

A. To inform us of the severe situation of water shortage in Cape Town.

B. To appeal to the world to come together to help people Cape Town.

C. To explain the cause of the severe water shortage in Cape Town.

D. To applaud the efforts by people in Cape Town to address water shortage.

 

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London to Brighton Bike Ride

The start

The bike ride starts at Clapham Common tube station

Ride carefully

We put together as many facilities as possible to help ensure you have a trouble-free day. But we also rely on you to ride safely and with due consideration for other cyclists and road users. Although many roads are closed to oncoming traffic, this is not always the case and you should be aware of the possibility that there could be vehicles coming in the opposite direction.

Please do not attempt reckless overtaking while riding---remember it is NOT a race.

______________

If you have an accident, ask a marshal for help; they are in contact with the support/emergency services. To call for help from our motorcycle marshals, give a ‘thumbs down’ signal. The marshal will do all he/she can to help, providing he/she is not already going to a more serious accident. If a motorcycle marshal slows down to help you, but you have just stopped for a rest and don’t need help, please give a ‘thumbs up’ signal and he/she will carry on. Remember---thumbs down means ‘I need help’.

In case of breakdown

Refer to your route map and make your way to a Mechanics Point. Mechanical assistance is free when you show your Rider Identity Card; you just pay for the parts.

Refreshment stops

Look out for these along the route. Most are organized by voluntary clubs and their prices give you real value for money. They are also raising money for their local communities and the British Heart Foundation, so please give them your support.

Rain or shine---be prepared

In the event of very bad weather, watch out for signs to wet weather stations en route. Good waterproofs, like a cycle cape, are essential. Our first aid staff can only supply bin liners and by the time you get one you may be very wet. However, the English summer is unpredictable---it may also be hot, so don’t forget the sun protection cream as well!

If you have to drop out

We will try to pick up your bike for you on the day. Call Bike Events(01225310859) no more than two weeks after the ride to arrange collection. Sorry, we cannot guarantee this service nor can we accept liability for any loss or damage to your bike. Bike Events will hold your bike for three months, after which it may be disposed of. You will be charged for all costs incurred in returning your cycle.

1.Which of the following subtitles might be suitable for the blank?

A. Emergency service    B. Attracting assistance

C. Marshal’s job    D. Contacting the marshal

2.Which of the following is WRONG about the Bike Ride?

A. The weather at the time of the Bike Ride is quite changeable

B. The drinks or waters along the way may be cheaper than usual

C. You don’t need to pay to replace a broken part of the bike

D. If you give up halfway and abandon your bike, it may be lost.

 

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