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假设你是李华,你的笔友Jack来信告诉你他想和几个同学开一家网上书店,想征求你的...

假设你是李华,你的笔友Jack来信告诉你他想和几个同学开一家网上书店,想征求你的意见。请根据以下要点给Jack写一封回信。

1.好处:可以学会理财及与人沟通,自己看书更方便等;

2.劣势:占用比较多的时间,经验不足,市场把握不好等;

3.提出建议。

注意:1.词数120左右;

2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3.开头语与结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。

Dear Jack,

I was very happy to receive your letter telling me about your plan of opening an online bookstore with some classmates.

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Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

 

Dear Jack, I was very happy to receive your letter telling me about your plan of opening an online bookstore with some classmates. It would be a great idea because you can learn how to manage money and how to communicate with others effectively. Besides,it will be easier for you to read new books so that you can learn more. However,opening an online bookstore will take up a lot of your spare time. Apart from this,you have little experience in the field and if you don’t know what books are in demand,you may lose some money. I think you should do some research first and learn how to run an online bookstore.What’s more,you’d better do the business during holidays. I’m looking forward to hearing from you again. Best wishes! Yours Li Hua 【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一份回信。文章应该包括优势,劣势以及本人的建议等三个方面的内容。本文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。 【亮点说明】本篇范文结构合理,涵盖了所有要点。文章使用了大量的连贯性过渡性词语,比如besides,however,apart from,what’s more等。这些词语的使用使得文章连贯流畅,整体性和逻辑性都非常好。 【名师点睛】 书面表达的做题技巧 首先考虑文章的逻辑性。弄清先写什么,后写什么。比如这篇文章就可以从开网上书店的优势,劣势以及自己的建议三个方面依次来写。 其次考虑文章的可读性。要求使用准确、丰富的词汇,还要注意地道而富于变化的句型的使用。一是注意简单句、并列句以及复合句的交叉使用,以增强文章的可读性;二是注意使用高级框架结构的句子,让文章的结构错落有致。 再次考虑文章的连贯性。注意使用恰当的关联词、过渡句等,使文章连贯通顺,让前后表达浑然一体。本文的关联词,过渡词的使用非常丰富,这为文章增色不少。  
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