Question

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假设你是李华，你的加拿大笔友卡尔想了解中国流行的广场舞（square dance）的相关情况。请你用英语给他写封回信，要点包括：

1．跳广场舞的时间、地点、参与人员等；

2．广场舞流行的原因；

3．广场舞引起的争议。

注意：

1．词数100字左右；

2．开头和结尾已经写出，不计入总词数；

3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Carl,

I’m delighted to hear from you and I will tell you what you’re curious about.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Carl,

I’m delighted to hear from you and I will tell you what you’re curious about. Square dance becomes more popular than anytime before. However, it’s a little different from the dance you are familiar with. In the morning or after dinner, people, especially elderly women, will gather in squares to dance to popular music. More and more young people are also joining in now.

There are many reasons behind its popularity. First of all, China has made great progress in its social and economical development in the past decades, and people have more time and energy to enjoy themselves. Besides, doing the square dance is a good way for people to get fit.

However, because dancers play loud music and occupy lots of public places, they annoy many people. Maybe square dancers need to make some changes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：

本文是给加拿大笔友卡尔写信，告诉他中国流行的广场舞的相关情况。文章给出了提纲，要求介绍跳广场舞的时间、地点、参与人员等；广场舞流行的原因和它引起的争议。成文时应注意以下几点：(1)内容要点齐全。(2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态：一般现在时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。

【亮点说明】

1.使用高级句型：包含定语从句的句子However, it’s a little different from the dance you are familiar with. 然而，广场舞和你熟悉的舞蹈之间有一些不同；More and more young people are also joining in now现在越来越多的年轻人也加入了。2.使用了过渡词语：First of all，Besides, However等。3.使用了重要短语：join in 加入；made great progress取得很大的进步；enjoy themselves玩得开心；make some changes做出改变。

考点：考查提纲作文