假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第l1处起）不计分。
Dear George,
It's been a week after we left your family and we are now back home. Thank you very much for showing them around your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. After we said goodbye to you, we went to Washington D.C., where we stayed for three days. My brother was so much fond of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying another couple of day. However, my father had to return to work on Monday, and we fly back last Saturday afternoon. It was really a nice experience. If you'd like to make trip to our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide.
Yours,
Mike
我校一年一度的运动会下个月月底就开幕了, 假设你是校学生会体育部部长, 请你以校体育部的名义发起一份倡议,号召同学积极报名参与校运会的各项赛事,并提前训练准备参赛.
要点: 要求：
1. 有益于身体健康 1.150词左右
2. 培养团队合作能力 为班级贡献自己的力量 2.能用到一句强调句 一句倒装句
3. 丰富自己的校园生活 增加亮点 3.注意卷面书写
4. 重在参与 提前准备
Dear schoolmates,
The annual sports meeting is approaching. ________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________
the Athletic Department of the Student Union
假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在该词下面写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
3. 修改格式错误不得分。
The main purpose of newspapers is to provide news. If you examine newspapers closely, you would find that there are all sort of news: accidents, floods, fires, wars, sports, books, etc. The news cover everything what happens to people and their surroundings. Sometimes there are news items which are very interested. A news report is usual very short, except for when it is very important, but it has a lot of information. It is also writing in short paragraphs. The first paragraph is in fact summary of the news items. He gives all the necessary information, what, when, where, how, and why.
Weight loss is a hard topic. Lots of people aren’t satisfied with their present weight, but most people aren’t sure how to change it. You may want to look like the models or actors in magazines or on TV, but those goals might not be healthy or realistic for you .____________1____________
So what should you do about your weight control?zxxk
___________2_________ The best way to find out if you are at a healthy weight or if you need to lose or gain weight is to talk to a doctor or dietitian（营养学家). __________3__________ If it turns out that you can benefit from weight loss then you can follow a few of the simple suggestions listed below to get started.
____________4__________People who lose weight quickly by crash dieting or other extreme measures usually gain back all of the pounds they lost, because they haven’t permanently changed their habits. Therefore, the best weight management ways are those that you can maintain for a lifetime.
Small changes are a lot easier to stick with than large ones. Try reducing the size of what you eat. __________5___________Once you have that done, start gradually introducing healthier foods and exercise into your life.
It’s a good idea to maintain a healthy weight because it’s just that: healthy.
A．Being healthy is really about being at a weight that is right for you.
B．Weight management is about long-term success.
C．Try to pay attention as you eat and stop when you’re full.
D．They will compare your weight with healthy standards and help you set goals.
E．Try giving up regular soda for a week.
F．Changing from whole to nonfat or low-fat milk is also a good idea.
G．Besides, no magical diet will make you look like someone else.
About ten years ago, a young and very successful businessman named Josh was traveling down a Chicago neighborhood street. He was going a bit too fast in his shiny, black, 12 cylinder Jaguar XKE, which was only two months old.
He was watching for kids rushing out from between parked cars and slowed down when he thought he saw something. As his car passed, no child came out, but a brick sailed out and—WHUMP! —it hit the Jag’s shiny black side door! Immediately Josh stopped the car, jumped out, seized the kid and pushed him up against a parked car. He shouted at the kid, “What was that all about and who are you? That’s my new Jag, that brick you threw is gonna cost you a lot of money. Why did you throw it? ”
“Please, mister, please. . . I’m sorry! I didn’t know what else to do! ” begged the youngster. “I threw the brick because no one else would stop! ” Tears were streaming down the boy’s face as he pointed around the parked car. “It’s my brother, mister” he said. “He rolled off the curb (路沿) and fell out of his wheelchair and I can’t lift him up. ”Sobbing, the boy asked the businessman, “ Would you please help me get him back into his wheelchair? He’s hurt and he’s too heavy for me. ”
Moved beyond words, the young businessman tried hard to swallow the rapidly swelling lump in his throat. Straining, he lifted the young man back into the wheelchair and took out his handkerchief and wiped the scrapers and cuts, checking to see that everything was going to be OK. He then watched the younger brother push him down the sidewalk toward their home.
It was a long walk back to the black, shining 12 cylinder Jaguar XKE—a long and slow walk. Josh never did fix the side door of his Jaguar. He kept the dent (凹痕) to remind him not to go through life so fast that someone has to throw a brick at him to get his attention. Feel for the bricks of life coming at you.
1.The boy threw a brick at the businessman’s car because _____ .
A．the businessman drove at a high speed
B．he envied the brand-new car very much
C．he wanted to get help from the driver
D．he wanted to ask for some money
2.Which of the following is the right order of the story?
a. The younger brother threw a brick at Josh’s car.
b. The elder brother fell out of his wheelchair.
c. The younger brother begged Josh for help.
d. Josh lifted the elder brother back into his wheelchair.
e. Josh shouted at the younger brother.
A．a, c, b, e, d B．a, c, d, b, e
C．b, a, c, e, d D．b, a, e, c, d
3.What can we learn from the passage?
A．Josh would accept the money from the kids.
B．Josh was a kind-hearted man
C．The two kids were Josh’s neighbors.
D．Josh’s new car broke down easily.
4.According to the passage, the last sentence means _____ .
A．trying to be more understanding seeing others in trouble
B．driving fast in a neighborhood street is dangerous
C．trying to get ready for the trouble in your future life
D．protecting oneself from being hurt
Winners Club You choose to be a winner!
The Winners Club is a bank account specially designed for teenagers. It has been made to help you better manage your money. The Winners Club is a transaction account(交易账户)where you receive a keycard so you can get to your money 24/7—that's 24 hours a day, 7 days a week!
It's a club with impressive features for teenagers：
No account keeping fees!
You're no millionaire so we don't expect you to pay large fees. In fact, there are no account keeping or transaction fees!
Excellent interest rates!
You want your money to grow. The Winners Club has a good rate of interest which gets even better if you make at least two deposits(储蓄)without taking them out in a month.
Convenient
Teenagers are busy—we get that. You may never need to come to a bank at all. With the Winners Club you can choose to use handy tellers and to bank from home using the phone and the Internet…You can have money directly deposited into your Winners Club account. This could be your pocket money or your pay from your parttime job!
Mega magazine included
Along with your regular report, you will receive a FREE magazine full of good ideas to make even more of your money. There are also fantastic offers and competitions only for Winners Club members.
The Winners Club is a great choice for teenagers. And it is so easy to join. Simply fill in an application form. You will have to get permission from your parent or guardian(so we can organize that cool keycard)but it is easy. We can't wait to hear from you. It's the best way to choose to be a winner!
1.The Winners Club is a bank account intended for ______________
A．parents B．adults C．winners D．teenagers
2.Which of the following is TRUE about the Winners Club?
A．Services are convenient for its members.
B．The bank opens only on work days.
C．Special gifts are ready for parents.
D．Fees are necessary for the account keeping.
3.The Winners Club provides magazines which ________.
A．encourage spending B．are free to all teenagers
C．help to make more of your money D．are full of adventure stories
4.If you want to be a member of the Club, you must ________.
A．be an Internet user B．be in your twenties
C．have a big sum of money D．be permitted by your parent
