Question

写作

下周日，你邀请Millie去瘦西湖（the Slender West Lake）游玩，请根据以下提示给Millie写一封邀请信。内容包括以下要点： 

1．上午8点在校门口集合，乘公交车前往，大约半个小时到达。

2．带一些食物、水。

3．瘦西湖环境（空气，花、树……）

4．可以划船、放风筝……

5．感受。

要求：1. 内容完整，适当发挥；

2. 表达清楚，意思连贯、符合逻辑；

3. 文中不得出现真实姓名，不少于80字。

Dear Millie， 

I am going to visit the Slender West Lake next Sunday.

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Wendy

Answer

One possible version：

Dear Millie，

I am going to visit the Slender West Lake next Sunday. Could you please go there with me? We are going to gather at the gate at 8:00 in the morning. We will go there by bus. It will take about half an hour to get there. We can take some food and water with us to have a picnic. There is fresh air with beautiful flowers and a lot of green trees. We will go boating and fly the kites. We will have a good time.

Yours，

Wendy

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，写一封邀请Millie去瘦西湖（the Slender West Lake）游玩的邀请函。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：We are going to......，It will take......，We can......，There is......，We will......等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了要邀请Millie去瘦西湖游玩，接下来介绍集合时间，交通方式，瘦西湖的风景以及我们将要做的事，最后指出我们将会玩得高兴。此处at the gate, by bus, have a picnic, a lot of, go boating, have a good time等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。